Rap- Whole World

Rap song I made after a bunch of my friends where arguing. Please rate, comment, and subscribe!
lyrics
I wish the whole world could all be peaceful
instead its filled with all these people who are always eviil
dont get involved with these folk
they follow the wrong path and its their fault they need hope

anger and hate,
its a dangerous trait thats indangering fate
once u make the choice to take the devils side
you avoid the great
let my voice annoy its a noise complaint
it aint my fault u cant take the news
its breaking you, if ur fake ur heart im gonna make it bruise
when I take u threw this naked truth
satins the one making fools
out of u,makes u hate the rules
drop out of school
lie to friends
in my defense
I might once tryed to hide my sins
but I wont try agian
I wanna fly with the angel when my life ends
to lies a cinch
im dying to be pure its why I exist
so know these rhymes i spit help me bind my grip

I wish the whole world could all be peaceful
instead its filled with all these people who are always eviil
dont get involved with these folk
they follow the wrong path and its their fault they need hope


im loosing my mind seeing whos in to crime
choosing to abuse and ruin mankind
who are u too approve if a decisoin is fine?
were all living in time,
so right now its my time to start delivering lines
that just might make you think about life in general
let me lay it down to you nice and gentle
im polite but mental
I might strike a nerve when i write with pencils
but I want you to know that the price is simple
look forward to hell,
you will probably even start ignoring yourself
cus you ll have no more family to make sure that ur well
ull be bored I can tell
but u can change it, rearrange this,
dont be afraid its just a brain twitch,
refrain from the past u came with
a habbit is bad if u cant tame it

I wish the whole world could all be peaceful
instead its filled with all these people who are always eviil
dont get involved with these folk
they follow the wrong path and its their fault they need hope

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• jethier1
• whole
• world
• peace
• song

[Mrfeebz]

how long you been writing lyrics?

[jethier1]

@Mrfeebz for a couple years maybe five

[kassidybodom]

wow u dont like the truth no reply just deletin my comment, whack bro.

[jethier1]

no its just that you are an idiot and talk shit because all your videos are two stars and your one of those kids that thinks your better than everyone and are pissed because no one besides your self thinks your good, I was trying to help you from getting more haters but fuck it, ill help you get hated on sense thats what you want, you should make friends not enemies and maybe people will listen to your shit

[pureballa5]

Hey thanks for the love man. You got nice rhymes, keep at it cousin. Your just rappin for the love of it and thats what its all about.

[mekr0]

Keep it up,but fuck all those people saying you should get a job as a rapper,that's bullshit..keep it underground str8 love..fuck the industry..this is hipHop..now thats a smart text with great flow..fuck you haters..Big Up

[abasanti]

your message is ok i guess, but you you need to definitely work on your vocals.

[4Musicviasearch]

LOL, do you use this as therapy or a way to heal yourself after a rough time, i hope but man keep this shit to yourself, or step back fuck your poetry and just listen. It's dead man. It's funny if anything

[djdanieljohn]

dude this ones your best, best multiples very solid lyrically,but if its written, then theres no excuse for your flo being too raw/vocal (happens to the best of white rappers) you need to match your flo with your personality a little differently at times...try perhaps adding lines from your day that aren't sung or rapped, but spoken, if not to break up the lyrical sound a little

chnge this, rearrange it, dont be affraid its just a braintwich!!

[TheToonChick]

NICE

[yoshie1001]

Hey bro. Look you have good lyrics but it might pay off to get a bit of voice training. Thats not an insult tho. Anybody can do it and it will make you sound way better. Just helpin cause ima rapper.

[ddeezz1]

not bad

[smmbpt1989]

Nice stuff. The hook's probably gonna get stuck in my head. Love the flow. Keep it up.