Short original film about a reformed criminal who suffered brain damage as a result of a gunshot wound to the head and the out of control spiral that drags him back into the criminal world.
Created as part of my FMP for my film course, hence the lengthy credits as a result of a need for clarity in regards to assesment.
i like it guys keep up the good work
metalsandwich91 8 months ago
@metalsandwich91 Thanks a lot.
9mmFilms 5 months ago
I rather liked it. It had it's weak moments though. I really liked the first 5 or so minutes, they built up character and tension. The middle part was the weakest, there was no tension, it started to drag and it didn't really understand why it was there. The ending got better though. Mostly I liked the directing, camera work, acting and sound design. The script could have been clearer and more focused, there were also minor techincal difficulties. Still, there was a lot more good than bad here.
Nordenerfilms 8 months ago
@Nordenerfilms Thank you for the indepth and honest comment, I appreciate it!
9mmFilms 5 months ago