~Four Colors~ CH 58

In this video first there are some doodles my BFF drew a couple days ago and they made me laugh so hard I started crying, hehe. After that is a video I made of my friends during gym class acting like the weird people that they are.... And has anyone noticed that almost all of my videos are always made in the gym at my school? LOL.
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Joe: *whispers in Kevin's ear* I think I'll take Bri to our new house after we leave the restaurant.
Kevin: Good idea.
Zach: Have you guys heard of that new movie called Twilight?
Krysten: Yeah...? What about it?
Zach: Isn't it about some vampires who drink orange juice or something?
Gabz: *laughs* No, but it does have vampires in it.
Zach: Oh because I was thinking about taking Sara to the movies later. We've been kinda fighting a lot lately and I want to make it up to her.
Brianne: Thats cool.
(They get to the restaurant and stay for about an hour to eat and finally when they finish everyone walks outside.)
Kevin: Ok, we can walk back to Gabz's place case we left our cars parked outside....
Zach: Then I'll drive to Sara's and take her to see Twilight.
Nick: I'll hang with Gabz today. *kisses Gabz lighty on the cheek*
Joe: And Bri I have to take you somewhere.
Brianne: Like a surprise?
Joe: A big surprise.
Brianne: Ooh yay!
Kevin: And Krysten and I are gonna go home.
Zach: Ok lets go.
(They all start to walk back to Gabz's place)

(With Joe and Bri in the car)

Brianne: So where are you taking me?
Joe: Somewhere special. (parks in front of a huge house and grins at Brianne)
Brianne: Hmmm, why did you stop here?
Joe: I kinda like this house, dont you?
Brianne: Yeah its gorgeous. I'd love to live in a house like this one day. Why?
Joe: Well you're wish has been granted. *smiles*
Brianne: What do you mean?
Joe: I bought this house for us.
Brianne: *her jaw drops in shock* Us-? You?! OUR HOUSE?!?
Joe: Yep.
Brianne: Oh my God, Joe! This is, the sweetest thing anyone has ever done for me. *hugs him* Its like such a beautiful house-
Joe: *laughs* You haven't even seen the inside yet.
Brianne: Can we go look?
Joe: *shows her the key for the house* Yes we can. *gets out of the car and walks over to her side and helps her out*

(With Zach and Sara at the movies)

Sara: *giggles* Stop tickling me! I'm trying to watch the movie!
Zach: *laughs and keeps tickling her* So?
Sara: *pushes him away and throws popcorn at him* Ha!
Zach: I know you did not just throw popcorn at me!
Sara: Oh well, I just did!
Man: *gets irritated* You two, please be quiet!
Zach: Whoa dude, you need a breath mint! Sara, c'mon lets ditch this place. *grabs her hand and they run out of the theater laughing*
Sara: I cant believe you just told that guy he needs a breath mint! That was mean!
Zach: But funny. *winks at her and places one arm around her waist as they walk back to his car* So what do you wanna do now?
Sara: How about the park?
Zach: Sara, its dark in case you havent noticed. And its kinda gay for a guy like me going to the park.
Sara: Well I think its really romantic if you took me-
Zach: TO THE PARK!! *grabs her hand and they hop inside his car, laughing*

(With Gabz and Nick)

Gabz: I'm bored. Call Kevin and ask him what he and Krysten are doing.
Nick: OK. *calls Kevin's cell* Hey Kevin..... what?.... STOP YELLING AT ME!!
Gabz: *giggles*
Nick: Geez man, I'm sorry!... fine I wont call you then! *hangs up*
Gabz: *smiles* What up with him?
Nick: He said he and Krysten were asleep and by me calling him I woke them up.
Gabz: Aw poor baby.
Nick: He sounded grouchy too.
Gabz: *sighs*
Nick: What?
Gabz: I was thinking about Bri...
Nick: *sits beside her* What about her?
Gabz: She was so excited when she called me and told me about the house Joe bought for them. And I just started thinking about how they're gonna spend the rest of their lives together in that house, and that they know they have a future together.
Nick: And...?
Gabz: *looks at him* I was just wondering if we have a future together.
Nick: *hugs her* Its kinda hard to tell right now, you know? We're only 16. But I can tell you that I love you.
Gabz: And I love you too.
Nick: *kisses her cheek and nuzzles her face a little bit* Would it be OK if I stayed here tonight?
Gabz: Uh huh. Sure.

I have decided that I will not post any more chapters after this; this story is ending here... I'm really sorry. I feel like a crappy writer, the story plot isn't very original, and I feel that this story is going nowhere. Thank you to those who have read and liked my story... but I do not have time to post any more chapters. I am currently writing a new totally different story but I will not be posting any of it on youtube or any where else. And I will PROBABLY not make another series after this. Sorry. :(

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[taylapearl]

OMGOSH! I WAS HOME SICK FROM SCHOOL ODAY READING THIS THEN SUDDENLY IT STOPPED..... WHY YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! Pleasee finish it.. x x Tayy.

[luvcjm80]

I wasnt happy with it, and it didnt seem original to ME, and im the writer, so thats kinda bad. I felt like it was going nowhere.

[xoandigrl96ox]

omfg!!!! i need u 2 make more videos!!! there is 2 much of the story unsaid that i need 2 read!!! - like the wedding and the birth of their babies and who the FATHER IS!!!!!!! Please make more!!!!!!!!

[luvcjm80]

I stopped this story 5 months ago cuz 1) I'm not much of a writer and this story is suck-ish and 2) I'm busy making another suck-ish story that I actually feel like working on in my spare time. Its not that good and I'm not posting it anywhere on the internet. :( sorry

[SHELBOP24]

DID U ABONDON THIS STORY?!?!?!?!?

[luvcjm80]

Yeah kinda. Read the bottom of the description box for more info.

[XoJonas4EverXo]

i miss yuur series . . /:

[xoandigrl96ox]

omfg!!!!!!! i need you 2 finish this series!!! i am addictd 2 these stories and u gotta finish them and il be totally upset 4 the rest of my life if u dnt finish!!!

[luvcjm80]

Yes i did. :(

[luvcjm80]

Sorry peoples.... there isn't going to be a chapter 59. This series is ending with this chapter. Read the bottom of the description box for more info. :'(