The Man's Pebble (Intern Show #1)

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This show was written, filmed, performed and edited by the interns. Please use the comments for your suggestions, advice and criticism. I promise they will read every one :) and they will use it to make their next ep.

• Category

  Film & Animation

[DanLightning]

I think the joke here lies in the juxtaposition of Matser's inane banter against Will's rant against powers that be, not the two narratives individually.

[rubberductape]

I really liked the back and forth, I thought it was well edited.

Will's realization was a bit sudden - how do you go directly from being terrified of failure to being totally cool with it? I liked the concept but felt there was a missing link there. The delivery was effective though.

Matser's narrative was good, but the delivery wasn't very engaged, and as a result, less engaging. This happens to me a lot when I'm too focused on my audience. Try to pretend you're alone talking to yourself.

[michaelmatzur]

I finished the internship.

[ChickenVendetta]

What ever happened to Will and Matser?

[Tacisawsome]

I entirely agree with CelestofOz. They really should try and find their own style. You can see Matser's a tad when he plays off his little harmonious jokes that you need to listen carefully for. And with Will, the energy he brings to the camera makes you really question what is going on in his head. I enjoy them both! Matser, you have my heart though:p

[CelesteofOz]

These guys are cute & have 'natural' flare but - they would do better to be more different from Ze, and find their own style.

[charles walker]

It's a little confusing

[RoseaNebulaLaeta]

It was somewhat difficult to follow each narrative with the cutting- but in some aspects they complemented one another. Also, although the peeble analogy seemed super weird at first- I really liked it, I feel like keeping those thoughts with me.

[Janothan Lazo]

the African American male performance it was really great he put a lot of himself into that act great performance

[joneiboy]

2:31 and I threw it on the GROUND!