The Unseen Part 3

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Uploaded by on Dec 18, 2011

Hi Guys :)) This is a short one but I hope you still like it.


Part 3: The Blue eyed boy

After seems like forever, my eyes fluttered open. My eyes wandered where I am and I realized I'm lying in an empty field with nothing but dead grass and trees. I then felt a lump forming on my throat. I started coughing insanely like something was being sucked out from my lungs. It was painful. I feel like I was dying—but then I remembered my sister. I have to look for her.

I stood up ignoring the burning sensation and the pain I was feeling up from my throat. I need to find her. That's all I can think about right now.

"Mila!" I managed to call out despite of the pain.

Silence.

"Mila!" I called out again.

Silence.

I walked even farther but there was still no sign of her. My head started thumping in pain. I feel so weak like all of my energy was drained out from me. I was about to give up when a pair of hands grabbed me by the waist. I only caught a glimpse of his face because he was wearing a hood over his head. I just know he has the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever seen in my life. I blacked out after that.

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  • omg i love this story.. its different then the others *-* :D

    as i saw you were back i was sooo happy :D

    keep writing :P :D

  • Diss sickk .! iLove the Mysteriousness that Envelopes tha Storii suh far :)) keep em cumin plzz .

  • it gets better and BETTER!wow great job so far :))

  • this series is so peculiar! in a good way!! :)

  • OMG this is good plz post soon

  • I love this.

  • Aww they finally met whoever that guy is :) next one please!

  • Omg, I love this so much :OOO

    Thanks for posting! I really can't wait for the next part.

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