War

In my first original upload, i have attempted to capture and depict the mood and happenings of war in this short piece of music. I've portrayed war in a less violent manner that focuses more on the loss and sadness than on the blood and violence. Feel free to point out anything you might notice or can relate to. Rate, Comment, Subscribe, EnJoY.

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[gluedmonkey]

it's a good song and i'm not gonna rip apart any little mistake you made when it comes to keeping up a good tempo and fluidity but one thing bothers me.. the title.. it's was way too happy of a song in the intro to be a song about war.. the middle was fine.. nice range of emotions but refine and work on the timing and such and it'll be a great song!!

[Gothguy47]

haha its true it's not the most fitting title. truth is, i hadn't come up with anything so when it asked me to write something down i was like "shit i need to call it something!". Anyway im looking for another title so if u have any suggestions please send me and i'll be happy to change it. =P

[XTuffxXxStefieX]

you need to work a little bit on fluidity. as well as the thought of the piece. i mean, it's a good piece but could be improved in my opinion.

[Gothguy47]

i agree with you completely. the good thing is i'm always making adjustments to it. so if i record it again it will sound nothing like this one =P

[Ottokar315]

do you have the sheet music on your computer ?

[Gothguy47]

no i don't have it on my computer.

[Gianfrancoco]

Sweet!

[we3are7art9]

This is really nice. I especially like the little part that starts around 4:00, it was nice.

[TheZooomm]

Its very good :D but you need to practice with a Metronome...

[Dalthii]

Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $

[Dalthii]

The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....

[Dalthii]

@Gothguy47 Then she stops and breathes like a sad thought you saw the head, and she with expression of cold and lonely night .... dunno ... Maybe a title would fit well as lovely tragedy or something. Do not know if it's very romantic on my part or complex fairy tale: / ... But that's how I felt the music: $

[Dalthii]

@Gothguy47 The music sounds a lot like the dance scene ... :) At first, the first two or three minutes of music I see a girl dancing gracefully, but suddenly something happens and she needs to leave .-. And she desperately runs toward the stairs, crying and holding a long dress, going toward who knows where or why ....

[Dalthii]

Of all the songs I heard this was the one that moved me ... Corresponded to the feelings I feel, to my state of mind ... This boy has exceptional talent, I loved a lot ... Congratulations, really! :)

[HeartOfSorrows]

also .. i think you should call your song " when minds collide" or " Inner battle" ... at 2:18 it almost reminds me of a duel.. well not really a duel but 2 couples fighting or... someone fighting with their conscience iono.. maybe its weird for me thinking that but it thought it was cool...

[HeartOfSorrows]

..omg im in love..... excellent...

[klapouszek29]

this is reallly good, i like it, so now- were're the sheet music.?