JS 2 - Nightime in the Daytime (Original Poem)

An attempt at a beat/spoken word piece.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• nightime
• hat
• pub
• bar
• cafe
• smoke
• rain
• city
• poetry
• beat
• spoen
• word
• jazz
• sessions

[dashpoet]

Love the variety in your work, and the simple pleasure of your performances. 5* again

[janeczka]

Thanks a lot!! I do try ;)

[QueenOfWannabe87]

Fine job Janeczka:) I love the steady beat and the way you read/perform your poems. It's very facinating to listen too and I love your accent too! You're very profound! I also like the cool black/white vid - it creates a very nice effect and "mood"! Playlisted! P&L, Anne

[janeczka]

Oh, thanks, Anne!!! it means so much to me :)

I'm glad my efforts don't go unnoticed. ;) Hopefully, more poems to come soon!!! Thanks for the support! :))

[msbunburyist]

This is awesome! You've got me inspired - now I'm thinking about snapping, beat, meter, wow. I had never really seen someone perform poetry to an audible beat before, and it was just plain awesome.

[janeczka]

Oh thank you!!!! coming from a poetry buff like you, it's a hell of a compliment. And I saw you subbed as well, which is even more of a compliment!!!

I thought the formula had been done before, but I'm glad I managed to pull it off. It would be pretty nifty if you did something like that!! :)

[msbunburyist]

I'm sure it's been done before, but I had never seen it - never thought it could be more than a cliché out of beat poetry, yknow.

Anyway, :)

[janeczka]

The stuff you do I couldn't do. So we're even ;)

[janeczka]

Thank you so much, Peter!!

That is one hell of a compliment!! :)

[nordicsky]

Your artistic imagination is as boundless as the universe is big...You inspire my art.

Kind regards, Peter