Beating-
Heart still beating for the cause-
Feeding-
Soul still feeding from the loss-
Aching-
Limbs are aching from the rush-
Fading-
You are fading from my sight-
Break of morning, coldness lingers on-
Shroud me into nightmares of the sun-
Moving-
I am moving closer to your side-
Luring-
You are luring me into the night-
Crying-
Who is crying for you here-
Dying-
I am dying fast inside your tears-
Plunging towards bereavement faster yet-
Clearing thoughts, my mind is set-
Devious movements in your eyes-
Moved me from relief-
Breath comes out white clouds with your lies-
And filters through me-
You're close to the final word-
You're staring right past me in dismay-
A liquid seeps from your chest-
And drains me away-
Mist ripples round your thin white neck-
And draws me a line-
Cold fingers mark this dying wreck-
This moment is mine-
Help me cure you-
Atone for all you've done-
Help me leave you-
As all the days are gone-
Devious movements in your eyes-
Moved me from relief-
Breath comes out white clouds with your lies-
And filters through me-
You're close to the final word-
You're staring right past me in dismay-
A liquid seeps from your chest-
And drains me away-
Mist ripples round your thin white neck-
And draws me a line-
Cold fingers mark this dying wreck-
This moment is mine-
Night falls again-
Taking what's left of me-
Slight twist, shivering corpse-
Ornated with water, fills the cracks-
Clasped in my limbs by tradition-
This is all you need-
you look like Mikael.
LWRCftw 1 year ago
@LWRCftw I don't really think so but... thanks
greg1553 1 year ago
check my video and take a look at my risk see how i do the part in the chorus it my help you to play better this part
donchipocles 1 year ago
@donchipocles sorry man i think i played right.
greg1553 1 year ago
@donchipocles thank you for the feedback, though. :)
greg1553 1 year ago
Good job, Greg. 5*
-Matt
95TurboSol 1 year ago
@95TurboSol thanks man. Appreciate it. That means a lot coming from you.
greg1553 1 year ago