Brother (Original Song-Full Demo Version)

This is a song that I wrote a couple of months ago. I hope you all like it. Feel free to comment! Thanks!

Brother

Verse 1
Looking back I see
A lifetime laid before me
So full of wonder
At times I lost the way
In a haze of my mistakes
They pulled me under

Pre Chorus
Ooo But You knelt low to raise me high
(whenever I fell down)
Ooo And though no words could pierce my ears
(Youd speak without a sound)

Chorus 1
Brother can You hear me
Calling home tonight
Have my words found peace on angels wings
Then carried to Your side
I just wanted You to know
In the depth of my despair
A body laid bruised and broken
But its heart was well aware
That You came
You gave
Everything I never knew I needed
Youre hand
Replaced
All the madness of a life in pieces
And instead of letting go
You came and made me whole

Verse 2
I slowly turn the page
And reveal another day
My surrender
Where You silenced my mistakes
With a price I couldnt pay
And left me breathing life anew

Pre Chorus
Ooo When You reached out Your hand to mine
(with a gift of healing)
Ooo It opened up my eyes to find
(that Im alive again)

Chorus 1
Brother can You hear me
Calling home tonight
Have my words found peace on angels wings
Then carried to Your side
I just wanted You to know
In the depth of my despair
A body laid bruised and broken
But its heart was well aware
That You came
You gave
Everything I never knew I needed
Youre hand
Replaced
All the madness of a life in pieces
And instead of letting go
You came and made me whole

Bridge
Scenes of yesterday
Replay endless memories
In the rearview
I can see You holding me
You know where Ive been
And what I will become
Still You help me to hang on.

Chorus 2
Brother can You hear me
Calling home tonight
Have my words found peace on angels wings
I just wanted You to know
In the depth of my despair
That I was well aware
That You came
You gave
Everything I never knew I needed
Your hand
Replaced
All the madness of a life in pieces
And instead of letting go
You came and made me whole
Brother I know
Its You that made me whole

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Tags:

• Brother
• Jesus
• Heaven
• God
• Christian
• Songwriter
• Rock
• reflective
• inspirational
• inspiring
• thank
• you
• help
• guidance
• guiding

[TimBic61]

Very nice song. I like this a lot.

[coolstormyknight]

@TimBic61 Thank Tim!

[miekemaligne]

What a beautiful song! I really enjoyed! Mieke

[coolstormyknight]

Thanks Mieke! Check out more if you get time...I'd love your opinion!

[jessicakobe]

This is awesome work!!! What a great catchy song!

I agree would buy it in a minute...but since I can't ....just put it in my favs!

Your a good song writer and an even better singer!

Love the pics in the video too...

<3 Jessica

[coolstormyknight]

@jessicakobe Thanks so much Jessica! I really appreciate the kind words. Like I told yetanothersongwriter...if you liked this...you might like "Shimmer in the Rain" and "Easier". They kind of have the same feel. I do have to admit though...as much as I'd like for this to be me singing, it's not. I write all the songs...words and music...but I have a guy in Nashville make the demo for me...and he and I work together to pick out the right voice for each song. Anyway...thanks again!

[coolstormyknight]

@yetanothersongwriter Hey...thank you so much! If you like this one...you may really like "Shimmer in the Rain" and "Easier" also. They kind of have the same vibe. Thanks again...and keep up your work. You're doing great and sound awesome!

[yetanothersongwriter]

There are song you listen to ...once, and you fall in love with. I fell in love with this one. If this was on Itunes, I`d buy it for sure. So well written!

Brother, I can hear you!

[Keniter]

Nice song... keep up the good work

[ltm89]

i really love this one! :)