Smoking Kills

Jose Enrique Rodriguez has been craving a cigarette. Join him on his continuous journey in search of a cigarette as he discovers that....Smoking Kills

Created by The Inverted Dog Party! at Fairleigh Dickinson University in 2011 as part of Campus MovieFest, the world's largest student film festival.

Smoking Kills Cast & Crew :
Ofir Davidesko - Captain
with
Joseph Rolon
Christina Ebenau
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Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• smoking
• kills
• cancer
• lung
• CMF

[joerol1]

@albertrobertsCA Actually I do understand what you mean sorta a suspense versus surprise thing. We give it away. The film could be just as powerful or moreso with the sudden appearance at the cemetery. I appreciate the feedback. This had actually been a problem in one of my CMF movies from last year. It was a different film completely, but one of the critiques I had received for that film was that we had just surprised the audience with the ending.

[albertrobertsCA]

@joerol1 I can't quite put my thoughts into words. Do you understand what I am trying to say? What's your feedback? And congratulations for winning the Wild Card!

[albertrobertsCA]

@joerol1 I wasn't quite touched when the guy said "Wait a minute, I died from lung cancer....". To me it would be more effective and shocking if you, for example, simply showed the grave and the guy standing in front of it. Your movie dragged my attention and kept me there for the first four minutes because I was trying to find out what the hell was going on. The idea was brilliant and the acting and shooting were phenomenal! I feel that you just gave away the ending, you didn't keep the mystery

[joerol1]

@albertrobertsCA Thanks for offering to vote. Voting closed on Sunday as we found out yesterday that we got the Wild Card. Thanks for the comment below too. Sorry the ending put you off. I'm curious and always up to critiques, what aspect of the ending were you referring to?

[albertrobertsCA]

what's your voting number?

[albertrobertsCA]

nice one. brilliant idea. very smart way of presenting facts. the ending put me off though. it was very obvious.