dinner blues (original song) take two

ok this is not any better than last time i posted it but whateverwhatever.

i f*cked a man for dinner
because i was hungry
i could get another job
that pays me more money
i could get another song
that sings with more pride
that knows who she is
and doesn't have to lie

the winter's rolling up
and the cold is creeping in
and the creeps are crawling home
from their poster-boy sins
and they're crying at crosses
in blind-eyed confusion
while the lusters and lovers
are lost in illusion

i met a man in new york
and i met a man in philly
and i ain't seen nothin'
compared to what's been seen
but that's how they like it
and if that's how they feel
i'd like them to get lost
and i'd like them to get real

there's a veritable cornucopia
of corny utopias
described in a whisper
in our lonely ears
by wacking-off wackos
and magazine covers
who make lonely lusters
of what would be lovers

ps. i got this guitar for free from a friend today. it came with some free buzzing sounds.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• dinner
• blues
• lovey
• dovey
• media
• creeps

[bevanmcg]

Love IT !! Have you got anything recorded where the sound does you justice?? You deserve to be heard !!

[ef416]

Your Ani covers are fantastic and this is a GREAT song, reminds me much of her style! ^_^ You have a lovely voice, please post more!

[ByronMortimer]

digging your original & oranjinal, and your wordspin lyrics . . .

?perhaps you can post more?

[RevelingInReverie]

Refreshing to hear some clever, well-written lyrics, and your voice is a breath of fresh air, too. I look forward to hearing more!

[imaginedbliss]

girl you are good! love your song!

[womby28]

i like this poem a lot. the melody is great. I would like to see you feel more comfortable, keep playin, girl

[dmio2]

Interesting poetry-- very unique & cool. Nice performance. Dig it!