STOP YOUR WHINING AND TAKE ONE FOR THE TEAM

This poem is my eight line entry for NewCompostion's
project. Now, if my blue bunny from France named Mone
and me can take a break from our Sunday drinking do
this -- that
means you bastards can too!

Friggin' lazy-assed poets!

See this link for instructions:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=68519PWYhOQ

NewCompositions's email: new_composition@hotmail.com

If you let Lucas down you let yourself down. WHAT IS SO DAMN HARD ABOUT THIS - I DID MINE WITH A RABBIT & BLASTED OUT OF MY MIND - I DEMAND YOU HELP HIM OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace :p

STOP YOUR WHINING AND TAKE ONE FOR THE TEAM

Fight for your right to... ah Hell,
just... sit down and stay there.
Refuse to participate.
Don't throw stones.

The way to change the world
is through non-violent resistance.
So revel in this realization
right up until your assassination.

(David Randall Curtis)

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[RDBAKA]

Isn't it "Take one for the Gipper?"

[DavidRandallCurtis]

RDBAKA: Ha... wasn't it, "Win one for the Gipper!" ? --- Lord knows the poor in the US had to take a lot from him... I was working with homeless shelters, food banks & domestic violence programs at that time - and everyone got their budgets slashed. I saw a lot people suffer because of that.

[pstaight]

So with this one, it's really a bit of a walk to get to the idea. We go from what I guess is not fighting for you're right to paaaaaaaatey, then ease into sarcasm, stay sarcastic until pretty much the end of the clip where we get assassinated.

Thinking about it I guess you're saying piece isn't the answer? Why didn't you address the globalization or just war theory?

[DavidRandallCurtis]

pstaight: thanks for commenting... well, I could address globalization... but that would turn it into a novel... bear in mind these are tiny little poems... they are just little snapshots - not big paintings... I know what you're getting at - and there are people that write long, good poems about such thing... but I'm not one of them... I am better short and sweet :p -- thanks again - you put a lot of thought into your remarks...

[InsatiableBlonde]

the computer, silly.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Ms. Blonde: Oh...  I KNEW that :p

yea it is all fixed... i think i owe you a private vid or something... i owe you something.... damn... can't think straight... it's like 3 am ....

[KraisinsGhost]

Oh David, I like this one a lot!

[InsatiableBlonde]

I only accept private vids of naked blue bunnies.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Blondie: I'm still trying to figure out what you mean by that question. I'm as thick as a brick :p

[DavidRandallCurtis]

MsWriteNow: I can say this in all honesty - and that is to get five stars and favorited by you - the best poet on YouTube... it just does not get any better than that. Thank you Tina...