Bitch Please

A song I wrote... I screw up a chord in the middle somewhere and sometimes I reach for notes which aren't really in the same key... But never mind that! :P

Remember kids, women aren't people!

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Here's a little song, about love that went terribly, terribly wrong
all was perfect until one night, when a little disagreement turned into a fight
calling his wife a whore, for speaking in the phone
"hey bitch there is more" then he proceeded to break her bones


He said "bitch please, bitch please, don't try to think for yourself
I don't care if it violates some human right, you're never to be allowed out of sight"
"bitch please, bitch please, don't form your own opinions,
do you think that anyone cares, I'll just tell them you fell down the stairs"


Days turn into weeks, hurt and abuse turns into habit
weeks turn into months, wounds they heal but scars they won't fade
Sitting at the bar, smoking and drinking beer
With his wife outside in the car, waiting just to hear


him say; "bitch please, bitch please, you do not need any friends,
all you need is me your man, not hopes, no dreams, no future plan
"bitch please, bitch please, why do you make me so mad
you should be glad when I decide to drill you, say no one more time and I'll kill you"


Months turn into years, a broken woman cries herself to sleep
Faced with only fears and a heart burned so hard, so deep
It's time to make a change, it's time to get her life back for good
Calling nine one one, officers cuffing his hands where he stood


Locked behind bars of steel, a very big man appears
Asking him "how does it feel?" and our man burst into tears


And the big guy said; "bitch please, bitch please, no need for that sad face
just bend over and I'll make it quick, I'm sure you'll enjoy my big hard dick
"bitch please, bitch please, don't think for a second we're done
you've won the lottery and here's your prize, I've rented you out to all the other guys"

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Bitch
• Please
• Whore
• Patrik
• Ahlström
• Heaven
• Dragonslayer
• Snejk
• Ballad
• Snöplog

[MaximusAdonicus]

This song was great man!! The lyrics were a bit unserious to be taken seriously, but I guess that was obviously the point xD You sing very well, even though ur accent blazes through, but at least on a song like this it doesn't matter at all. Your deeper voice at the end was very convincing and much fuller than ur troubadour voice :P

[GoAniMeGo]

@MaximusAdonicus Hey, thanks a bunch!! I got the idea to make a ballad with da gangstah wordZ bitch please :D So yeah, making it too serious would just defeat the point ;D

I think the deep part in the end gives a nice touch to the song.. People always except key raises :3

Thanks again, you've got a keen ear! :D

[HumanumEstAestivum]

Vote 5/5 x), love ending. Sad song though :'(

[GoAniMeGo]

Coolcakes! Thanks :D Aye, that was the plan :)

[schnatrick]

AWESOME =O

[GoAniMeGo]

Det vet du!

[MaximusAdonicus]

@GoAniMeGo Yayza! That was a fast response! People should be sleep by this hour ;)

[witenites]

sad but nice

[makipajti]

omG.. Paul Bettany: D

i like this song : )

[MKFBeats]

really good. även om jag tyckte att rytmen stördes på något enstaka ställe. älskade slutet också. KEEP EM COMING! :D