Jonas Brothers love story- It all began at 7:05 (Chapter 1)

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Uploaded by on Mar 21, 2008

This is my first chapter and my first story ever! I know it isn't very good but trust me it gets wayy better! Just stick with me please! Feel free to comment and rate! Thanks! :] Sorry it's so short. They get longer as it gets better. Let me tell you a little bit about the characters.

My friend Kati as Tara- 15 [Allison's younger sister]
My friend Andrea as Nichole- also 15 [Tara, Allison and Kirsten's best friend]
Me as Kirsten- 17 [Nichole, Tara and Allison's best friend]
My friend Emily as Allison- 18 [Tara's older sister]

It began like any other normal day. Tara, Nichole, Allison, and Kirsten were hanging out at Tara and Allison's house, surrounding one of the two computers, laughing their heads off at the videos of the Jonas Brothers appearing on the screen. Allison was on the other computer, not paying any attention to the other three girls. Nichole, Tara, and Kirsten weren't acknowledging Allison's presence until she began screaming at the top of her lungs. Kirsten ran over to Allison trying to figure out what was wrong. When Allison finally stopped screaming she told Kirsten the Jonas Brothers were coming to Milwaukee and for a total of $70 they could go to the concert and get backstage passes for before AND after the show. Just then Kirsten began screaming as well. So of course Nichole and Tara needed to know what was going on. Once Allison told them what was going on they started screaming their lungs out too. Tara's mom came running into the room with a very panicked look on her face. She didn't seem happy with them at all. Allison just said it was because the Jonas Brothers were coming to Milwaukee and they really wanted to go see them. Their mom said she would think it over with their dad and let them know by the end of the week if they were able to go. Kirsten immediately called her mom and asked her if she could go to the concert. Kirsten's mom being so cool and understanding said that would most definately be alright. Nichole was the one everyone was worried about. She didn't think her parents would like the price or the distance. But she called and asked them anyway. They didn't want to give her an answer until they knew all of the plans and all the other things parents worry about. Everyone was freaking out and worrying whether or not they would be able to go. Kirsten wasn't too worried about herself considering her mom had said she could go but she was worried for her friends because there was NO WAY she was going to go to this concert by herself. Just then Tara and Allison's dad walked in through the door and immediately the girls raced towards him yelling about things he clearly couldn't understand just by looking at his facial expression. Their mom then walked into the room from the kitchen and told the girls to go busy themselves while they talked in complete silence and privacy.

To be continued...

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Song: Right Where You Want Me- Jesse McCartney

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  • my name is tara and i love Nick

    YAY! :) LOL

  • Haha. Well awesome! :]

  • sounds good!

    i'll keep reading

    check out mine too!

  • Thank you! :] I'll do that. =]

  • i like it!! 8)

  • Thank you! :]

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  • Hi. Great story. I find it so cool that you are putting yourself in you story. My friend is doing the same. Can you at least watch or comment on one of her stories. It would mean a lot. So if you want drama go for THE WAY WE WERE but if you want comedy with a hint of romance go for CAMP ROCK MIX UP. Thanks so much.

  • awsome! keep writing ! :D

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  • Dun, dun, dun. Haha, I hope Nicole is able to go and that's Allison & Tara get to go too. :] But $70 for a ticket?! That's really awesome, lol.

  • i used to read this hwen i was lke 8 haha now im 14 it brings back memories

  • i sounds cool i going to read it 4 sure

  • @Jobrosarehott21 aw thank you... i havnt been on in soo long lol i havnt written any in FOREVER! my account i use now is TaylurNikol001 (i dont have any vids yet haha)

  • Haha. Well thanks. :] It gets soooo much better! And my other stories are way better!

  • Thank you! :]

  • Awwa. My gosh. Thank you so much. :]

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