Terrible, terrible opening shot. She looks great and has a a wonderful smile. Didn't need to be a 1:00, would have been better and more concise as a :30. Sometimes less is more. I would have focused more on her. If I see one more "rolling the stocking up/down the leg" shot... At least you didn't go black and white the whole time. Overall, nothing special. Good luck!
the girl was cute. but i felt that it wasn't ridiculous enough. understand its not real. so it needs to be more satirical
shallowmaster 3 years ago
Terrible, terrible opening shot. She looks great and has a a wonderful smile. Didn't need to be a 1:00, would have been better and more concise as a :30. Sometimes less is more. I would have focused more on her. If I see one more "rolling the stocking up/down the leg" shot... At least you didn't go black and white the whole time. Overall, nothing special. Good luck!
jcarrier1 3 years ago
Cute smile on that girl. Good use of the tag from the book.
zacksbisque 3 years ago