The Rose Color [Original Song]

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I wrote this when I couldn't sleep. I think it was at midnight, but I go to bed early...


the rose color
lauren ligocki

i'm here alone, a well-lit room
but the lamp isn't too bright
i wear tinted glasses to desperately
see the world in a different light

everything i hear
they say just be yourself
original individual
like everyone else

a hundered pictures on the wall
captured points in time
if only i could use lined paper to
capture what's tearing my mind

everything i hear
they say just be yourself
original individual
like everyone else

the words i mean to say
are trying to get out
all i want to show you
is all that i don't know

Category:

Music

Tags:

• alternative
• indie
• classical
• pop
• unsigned
• songwriter
• piano
• culture
• society
• individual
• punk
• teenager
• emo
• laughing
• baby

[jachil1]

This is pretty good :) love some of the notes and your voice sounds really nice on the quieter notes :) I'm an aspiring song writer myself...love it if you could give me my first comment on one of my videos! Good luck x

[CyborgxHR]

Love it <3

[EljoshVincent]

Tu cancion es realmente hermosa.

[oldfashionedperson]

this is really good!!! i love love it... u have a character girl, love it!

[OhioStylee]

Love it...will you marry me? lol

[AnimeGangrelVamp]

This is my favorite. :)

[hearkenstwings]

You remind me a little of a younger Alanis Morissette. You are a natural. Very nice!

[holloweddarkness]

This is very good. i have one critisism. i dont want you to take this wrong i mean it to be totally constructive. i dont know if its just this recording but you could work on your articulation a bit more. I semi-professionally record and mix tracks for bands and a sound guy would want to cut your head off after about 2 hours of trying to get a vocal track down. other than that, this song has great potential and could be really amazing with a soft drum track and a guitar and bass part. Great!!!

[live4mac]

awesome

[Kenji2love]

GOOD! YOUR chinese good!