Htc Desire Commercial

The final outcome of my school project.
Feedback would be nice.
edited using Adobe AE cs3 and sony vegas pro 9.
music is by ratatat so all credits for the song to them.

Category:

Science & Technology

Tags:

• Htc
• htc desire
• desire
• smartphone
• school
• prosject
• ad
• commercial
• phone
• mobile
• android
• after effects
• sony vegas
• comp
• review
• simply clever
• jebbis
• MrJebbis

[pcfreak1992]

what's the name of the song?

[MrJebbis]

@pcfreak1992 Ratatat - One. from the album 9 beats

[stf00001]

hahaha....craig david album, nice

[MrJebbis]

@stf00001 totally random i tell you.. hehe

[frankjuuh]

Good:

- I think you did a great job at trying to point out how much people want convenience in their everyday life.

- Did a good job in showing some of the features in the HTC Desire.

Meh:

- The intro took a little too long, so I think that if it were a tv promo, people would get bored.

- The part where you zoom in on the phone and use some of its features is a little messy, try stabilizing your camera and somehow working on decreasing the screen's reflection.

Overall I think it's a cool vid!

[MrJebbis]

@frankjuuh Ty for the feedback!

yes its way to long to be a tv promo, but it was a big school project so i guess i felt i had to make somthing with a little lenght. Well to late to change it now.

[2silvertv]

@Kvalos Are you kidding me?

[Korntoff]

Damn, I wanted a close-up of that chair.

[kingofpie1020]

pretty good comemrcial for an amatuer advertiser :D

[Kvalos]

omg is that the new iphone??

[OnlyLifeMatters]

You sure have potential to go for commercial career, man

[MrLppa]

Nice job, but too long for an ad, and the part when we see the HTC Desire is unfortunately so bad. :/

Another version will be great!

[2mari4u]

I absolutely LOVE the ending: 'HtC Desire; Desire Htc'

Good job!