Here is a stop motion I did when I was at High School and it was animated in a sustained 48 hour period. It happened to be a homework I did for my art teacher and when he looked at it, he got more than he bargained for.
Clearly a lot of effort went into this and while I commend you for that, it does have issues with coherency (both in story and visuals) at times. You shouldn't have used a sequence of smooth, uncut camera motion near the end; it's jarring given the difference between it and the rest of the film. It'd also be preferable to use a cleaner audio source.
That having been said you clearly have a lot of patience and love for your work; keep experimenting and learning!
Nice!
GuardianShortMovie 1 year ago
Clearly a lot of effort went into this and while I commend you for that, it does have issues with coherency (both in story and visuals) at times. You shouldn't have used a sequence of smooth, uncut camera motion near the end; it's jarring given the difference between it and the rest of the film. It'd also be preferable to use a cleaner audio source.
That having been said you clearly have a lot of patience and love for your work; keep experimenting and learning!
NephilimX 3 years ago
that was cool
dangerwolf 3 years ago
i think that was actually the first cinematic sequence to ever truly scare me
oshron 3 years ago
It was just like that Gargoyle did in Fantasia 1940
Blackrhinoranger 3 years ago