umm just some ramdom poem composed by me when i couldnt sleep lOl
ty for some1's help dat it got even betta [u knw who ur] lOl love u N finally hope u guys like it :)
And yh its kinda out of place hehe sorry for dat
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Timi ayou mero jiwan ma
Thahaina paikina chorilagyo yo mutu
Kina choryo? Kasarii choryo??
Maya bandhan ma badhi diyo Mayalu
Timro tau gulabi ottle
Lazalu muskan le lathai parigayo malai
Marchau ki kya ho timro tau nashalu haraile
[oh.mo.na]
Maan ma chinta hunalagyo kina.ho.kina
Darr ta lagirakhethiyo yo maan timilai dina
Tara yo maan manena juina timi bina
Juinu ra marna timro hath ma chodi.diye
Timro lagi bhanera maile k k nai gari.diye
Timi paryo nisthuri malai todi.diyou
Yo hath thame pachii chordina bhanethiyo tara aja kina chordi.diyou
Hamile khayeka ti bhacha/kasam kina todi.diyou
????????
Todnunai thiyo bhane kasam kina khayou?
Chordnunai thiyo bhane maya kina layou??
Nisthuri mayalu
Maya marigayou!!!
^.^
u should sing a song by rewriting n rearranging the words
its good ^_^
TheKiyoshi04 8 months ago
@TheKiyoshi04: hehe yhh actually it was meant to be a song but oh well..cuoldnt match the music N plus i dont play a guitar dats y i just made it inot a poem thanxx anywayy tc^ ^
ai1ning4k 8 months ago
@ai1ning4k hehe its great that u put that paino music and ur words :) welcome cya around tc ^_^
TheKiyoshi04 8 months ago
@TheKiyoshi04: hehe yhh the composer of the paino music izz awesome Yiruma,,thanxx again cya tc^ ^ xD
ai1ning4k 8 months ago
like it '' music's too touching''
limgksbp13thsunuwar 10 months ago
@limgksbp13thsunuwar: hehe thank u veri much^ ^
ai1ning4k 10 months ago