You know.. The intro is way too long, even for a House-like track. There is nothing happening in the song for , like, 2 looong minutes. However, good work on the vocals. Overall, you are being too repetitive. You'd need to give it a more melodic improvements, add some color to the track, it is sounding kind of dull. Nevertheless, you have good ideas, keep practicing and doing songs, you'll become better and better ;)
Don't listen. You can shorten cuts for listening releases, I'd rather do an original cut to a song as a longer version in any case.
wannabeadj 1 year ago
You know.. The intro is way too long, even for a House-like track. There is nothing happening in the song for , like, 2 looong minutes. However, good work on the vocals. Overall, you are being too repetitive. You'd need to give it a more melodic improvements, add some color to the track, it is sounding kind of dull. Nevertheless, you have good ideas, keep practicing and doing songs, you'll become better and better ;)
adeptsephiel 1 year ago