揮著翅膀的女孩

The original track is better.

影片好蘿莉= ="

gd!!!!!!!

i like the chinese one better!

this song makes you fly!! very beautiful!!

這是我們的放學歌ㄟ，我們都覺得好好聽

@minnielin1230 Thanks dear :) I seriously thank you for your feed back But instead of telling me my grammar is bad why not show me how i can improve? I mean seriously English is not a language you can improve over night :) But thanks I am still trying to improve :) But hope you really understand that I am not criticizing I am telling her that the pronunciation is bad. That's all :) see you around :)

很好聽，但發音不標準。加油吧！

Thank you for your Feedback ^^ But still the English is bad and Pronunciation is bad. This is a feed back :) Unlike you, i think she can handle it better then you :)

@muacigal : come on, from my previous comment, i thought you should have learned to improve your grammar and spelling by now,, but hmm i guess i was wrong. and fyi, by replying my previous comment, i think you just showed me that she can handle it better 'than' you too