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The Heretic: poem by Santiago De Vil.

I see the shadow of the Beast, standing there with its black but not broken soul I look into its eyes: I see nothing but woe and lost joy, like a child whose lost his toy and lost his way home On...  
 
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tyme2cry (2 weeks ago) Show Hide
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still 1 of my favorites.... not just on youtube.... but 1 of my favorites period... "black.. but not broken soul"... brilliant bro... very nice
poetry2prose (6 months ago) Show Hide
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ive been beating my self back and forth about this... do i stay as i am?.. and be a conformist?... er do i do as my blood tells me... and break away and out of the expectations of those that dont have 2 walk in these shoes... and become the beast?... and in turn... become the heretic. we will see.....
very nice bro.

i'm subing.. and ur getting 5 from me.
check out my stuff... im just getting going.. but i'll be posting more.

-poetry2prose
IraqIsWhack (8 months ago) Show Hide
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I'm a bit late but I like this poem
santiagodevill (8 months ago) Show Hide
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ye, it was a bit surprising lol. better late than never :) i never comment on you're stuff becous i have nuthing original to say other than "good stuff" either. but you're stuff has a realy doune to earth, human to human style to it. thanks for the comment.
Nyhee7 (8 months ago) Show Hide
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I like how deep this poem goes and yet seems like an everyday topic, but it isn't at all. Ironically, I find more freedom in the lighter realm. For the darker realm seems trapped in childhood.

Excellent poem, very descriptive and the flow is tight, not loose or chaotic. Very talented mind you have.
Loreleila (10 months ago) Show Hide
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'i envy the beast. even when i see its never at peace. but at least it knows its free'

:)
Loreleila (10 months ago) Show Hide
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This is extraordinary. Thanks for the direction David. :)
nordicsky (10 months ago) Show Hide
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Janeczka sent me here, and she was right. This is the most amazing poetry.

"I see the shadow of the beast standing there with its black but not broken soul." What a fine first line.

Thanks for posting this,
Regards, Peter
TheSunShinesbyGrace (10 months ago) Show Hide
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"It sings from its throat the sound of dying life" is incredible!
ladyofire (10 months ago) Show Hide
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This is excellent!

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