Rema tries Pollock

Nice try, but the end result is no pollock !!

Don't try Pollock! Try Rema!

What happens with the art around the picture? Don't say you want to throw the "painted" newspapers into a garbage pail!!!!!

What music is this!!

The finished piece looks more Joan Mitchell like than a Pollock.

what type of paint did you use?

You should have shown the completed painting hung on a white wall, because the natural light & shadow diagonal distracted from its impact. Also, you probably know, the diptych format elicits a ' formal ' stance, from an informed viewer. Anyway, you seemed to have taken the time to isolate some of Pollock's drip, dribble & spatter etc., vocabulary! Good try!

Every bit as good as Pollock. That is to say, every bit as bad.

Try dripping and not flicking. Draw and your dribbles will come - and when you think you're done, keep going - and when you think you're done, keep going