1. Inappropriate clothing for an adult going to a job interview.
2. Seemed uncertain and yet over-rehearsed.
3. Every characteristic she said she had she should have *shown* instead. No one cares if you say you're reliable, especially if you throw it in randomly. You should tell a story that ...
Perhaps me - a couple minor things may have helped. I would be careful about: "Whatever you dream of, it doesn't really matter" to someone in a suggestive state. "Anything you dream of is fine" - fewer connotations. "Let your mind drift" is too much license to drift to stressful thought. A lo...
Kind of quiet - hard to hear.