If the beat was alittle slowa it might make the repeat pow pow more effective, it just goes too fast for me to trill with. As for the comment about lil wayne and Eminem as related, it's not funny to me, personally I think its wrong and it reeks of sublime racism.
Concept: very interesting. Scope: eye-opening. She is quite beautiful, he is very likeable. All in all, I like this alot. I hope to hear more on the same theme, perhaps with some additional subtle background. A+!
An artist, a poet, I'd like but I can't connect with the rapper.