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I know another not perfect performance but please tell me what you think as taking exam when they send date so its prob in 4 to six weeks time.

thanks

first take, I know mistakes and not perfect, but you get one go in the exam and teaching myself so please comment all bad if it is as I want to get...

Ist take this morning, not perfect but please comment good and bad as want to know where to improve. Thanks and any oldies out their learning like ...

There are some cringe worthy bends in here and need to re do this one.