Kids I swear. There is a reason you don't see really great magicians doing all that stuff...because it does deplete alot from the experience for the spectator. The more icredible looking things you do in front of people, as in the over the top flourishes, the more they attribute the effect to you...
Don't like the starting double. That first change is nice. The second one... can't remember the name... the dan and dave crap... too noisy. Not practical. Replace it with something easier. Work on getting your 2 card breaks smoothly instead of riffling them. Kills me when people show all this ski...
Where the original routine came from should not be the issue. It was obviously learned from the David Stone video. It is an exact handling which brings up the question "Where the hell did you incorporate your specific handling?" I hope by this time you have drastically improved on this since this...
Kids I swear. There is a reason you don't see really great magicians doing all that stuff...because it does deplete alot from the experience for the spectator. The more icredible looking things you do in front of people, as in the over the top flourishes, the more they attribute the effect to you...