(cont) I think that if you make those slugs shorter, maybe 5-10 frames then the tension would be better felt. I hope this helps. I kept my critique to post work because you probably don't want to go back and re-film. I can offer critique on story and camera work if you're interested to keep in mi...
I just recently met my birthmother and I have to say that I wish it was as beautiful as this. There were no cameras or even tears. I'm glad I did it, but it didn't feel special like I had hoped it would. Although I still have contact with her, I just can't seem to figure out how I feel about ever...
(cont) I think that if you make those slugs shorter, maybe 5-10 frames then the tension would be better felt. I hope this helps. I kept my critique to post work because you probably don't want to go back and re-film. I can offer critique on story and camera work if you're interested to keep in mi...