I like the first tempo. quarter = 120. But I also like the anxiety that builds when you play it much faster. In some ways it is pretty good just the way you have it. Perhaps you could re-arrange it a bit leaving out some of the middle tempos that don't seem to be as strong.
I like the first tempo. quarter = 120. But I also like the anxiety that builds when you play it much faster. In some ways it is pretty good just the way you have it. Perhaps you could re-arrange it a bit leaving out some of the middle tempos that don't seem to be as strong.