Good rhtyhm and tone and musicality in the first mvt. pitch is sharp. Good tarte to vibrato work-keep it consistent. I like your tempos. Check piano with tuner and then tune your concert A (your F#) to a tuner.
rhtyhm is mostly incorrect in the first movement. You are not counting through the majority of your held notes. Priavet lessons with an educated music teacher would have helped greatly. Once the basics are in place then you can work on tone, and musicality which is entriely missing..
If this whole documentary states how the community came together to bring band back FOR THE KIDS, then GREAT! But this video certainly portrays it as community REPLACING music education for students, which is just as bad as if it were gone completely.
I am another union teacher, married to another union teacher in Ohio working in Public Schools and we ABSOLUTELY AGREE with Thompson.. I burned that issue becasue of the years of MY family's money going toward a liberal agenda..money my family needs going to an agenda that we don't agree with.
Good rhtyhm and tone and musicality in the first mvt. pitch is sharp. Good tarte to vibrato work-keep it consistent. I like your tempos. Check piano with tuner and then tune your concert A (your F#) to a tuner.