yo yo your style is dumb you full of come up to the rim you proberly got the brew from a guy named Jim you think you better than Fury or eminem yeah right when slim shadies STOP goin crazy my rhymes make you dazy pick a pocket lock it in you vault and all my crimes will never come to hault my assult might the day jason stops givin lil kids a fright not a single emcee is at my height im so high not from weed from my evil eye inside my mind you'll find a disinclined kid waiting to get rid of a hater that says i hate you Fury

hey, i saw your comment on my channel! thanks for checking my songs out. i saw a couple of your videos and some advice i have is to get a mic and start recording your songs instead of using your webcam. and also i can see that you write a lot, but maybe try to change up your style a little bit, make the entire piece sound cohesive, because it sounds a little choppy. i always take a couple of hours out of the day to record, because you have to record many trials before you get the right one. i hope i helped you out man! keep rapping and follow your dreams! :)