Have you had her since she was a baby? If so do they get darker? Because yours' colors looks much darker than mine, and mine's still a juvenile; about a year old.
I'm Sparkfur me and my mate Jayfeather are looking for a new clan we can call home.We were exiled from Sunclan who live far away on a different territory.We have traveled far and are very tired and hoping to find a new clan soon.
Awesome song. I've been listening to it for hours.
But one thing is wrong with the lyrics you have.
It's SPEAK bravery, not SWEET bravery.
I see how you can think it's sweet though, so it's not a problem, just an honest mistake.