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ReigateCollege2 commented 1 month ago

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Group47 Second Rough Cut

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An atmospheric opening, you capture a real sense of genre and the sequence is effectively edited. Excellent sound design and the flickering titles on the tv screen work well. Overall a very good peice of work.

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ReigateCollege2 commented 1 month ago

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group45 2nd rough cut.mov

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Excellent camera work and atmospheric sound. The titles are fine but do the convey the genre effectively? On the short side, but everything works well.

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Group046 Rough Cut 2 - Estrangement

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There is a problm with the sound on the ident as the sound is only playinng out of the right speaker. The sequence is very well edited and atmosppheric ande sound works well although there is obviously more to do. The titles are good although the opening title should read Vintage Entertainment ...

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Group044 MainTask rough cut 2

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The main issue with your sequence is that it doesn't feel like an opening. You need to rethiunk your titles as at the moment they look like closing credits rather than titles. See my blog for details on this. The flashbacks work well but you can;t here the dialogue due to the the uneccesary drill...

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ReigateCollege2 commented 2 months ago

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Group023

Jade, Amy and Ellen's ROUGHTCUT AS media film

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This is shaping up well. There is a good build up of pace, and a good variety of shots. The attacker does look menacing/sinister and the reaction shots of the victim are very good

MCU Shot at 0.57 - could/should move to 0.38 section?

What will you do about the blood question???

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  Group022-RoughCut-JH.mov

  Rough cut for media

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  This is shaping up very well - I agree with comments below about simple idea done well - great variety of shots and angles. I've had to watch this without sound - will comment on that later

  Well edited in terms of continuity

  Font choice for actors interesting - I think it works, but not 100% sur...

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  group021-roughcut-scapegoat, opening sequence

  Here is the rough cut of our own opening sequence (charlie, Rob and owen) The Movie is called 'Scapegoat'. We will later release the final copy whi...

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  Good build up - narrative clear

  good close ups and variety of shots

  some good mise en scene details

  Prod company name - hold longer?

  take out or change shot at 0.6

  First victim shot too long?

  Might be able to create a 'blind effect' (re other comments below)

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  Group 019 rough cut main task JH

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  Some excellent mise en scene details

  Good that you keep the killer's id hidden - creates enigma

  Like CU of knife

  Like dead body shot sequence

  Possible issues at this stage -

  At 0.43 one frame has a different aspect ratio

  continuity on door opening very slightly off

  maybe lose one of the panning P...

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  Group009-Rough Cut-JH

  Rough cut, Main Task film. Group 009

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  I agree with some of the comments below - really good variety of shots and angles.

  Good use of props and well chosen clothing for both characters.

  Narrative pretty clear.

  I would cut several of the walking shots - too many shots. When the character in red turns round might be a good place for an ...

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  Group008-RoughCut-JH.mov

  This is the rough cut of our main task (group008)

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  I like the running - I think it will work well with titles, and maybe a little more editing. I love the sound so far which I think sets a suspenseful, ominous atmosphere and can easily be built on. Your ident is really good.

  Not sure you have the best shot order yet. You could/should? slo-mo the...

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  Group011-RoughCut-JH.mov

  Our rough cut of our film we are making as a group.

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  I love the concept of the Darkroom and think the red filter will work very well

  I like the slo-mo effect of the victim running

  The CUs of the killer are effective

  At 0.42 and 1.08 the red effect looks red - so double check in FCE

  Think again about shot order - the last shot could make a great fi...

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SURGEON-Group 081-Cris mum Rough Cut 2

This is a teaser trailer about a surgeon who has a tendency to kill. Is his assistant next?

THANKS FOR WATCHING :) (My Jeans)

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Also the final shot needs to be edited or perhaps even taken out as you can see the spotlight in the background!

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Main Task-Group082-CM.mov

This is our Main Task and our final teaser trailer for our film. It is about a woman scarred so badly she takes it out on others.

Thanks for Watch...

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Also don't forget to rotate your portrait photos, not sure that the last image works? Perhaps put in another crime scene image

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Complete Rough Cut - Group 080

This our final trailer! We may make small changes but for now this is what we've got!

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Some well framed shots and well edited although some cuts could be tightened up slightly for more impact at key dramatic moments in the trailer. The sound is effective although could be more prominent in relation to the diegetic sounds. Overall though a very good trailer.

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main task group079 CAM

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Some well framed shots and the mise en scene works well, the sound could still do with some work (the transitions could be more seamless) and the first title could be sped up to have more impact.

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