Hm. You kinda tip your hand here by letting us know you are in the photo/video feild. Still, very nicely done with the door thing. But your protagonist got too involved with the foil of the plot and left the premis of the plot. He shouldn't have seen the staging table move. Just have the swing by...
On the whole, good film work. I mean, I am tired of the "first person camera" thing, but still very well done. A bit hack-ish in your "ghost girl". I mean come on, you may as well have said that the girl from the ring is haunting your apt. I did like the one-two sighting, that was well done. Just...
Hm. You kinda tip your hand here by letting us know you are in the photo/video feild. Still, very nicely done with the door thing. But your protagonist got too involved with the foil of the plot and left the premis of the plot. He shouldn't have seen the staging table move. Just have the swing by...