Greeting from Rome, Italy!
It is difficult to understand what is your problem when the audio is so bad!
Anyway I think I got it, goodluck and belive me... in Italy is not better.

heart's in the right place
audio is bad
shooting style changed several times
basically, i think although it was for youtube, this vid was rushed.
we will watch anything visually these days, ie it doesn't matter what it's shot on. but the audio has to be good.
these are slick actors. but the video isn't.
needed some phone numbers to pop up on screen. plus there's dead air at the end for a minute or so.
production values are lacking.

oh my god that was TERRIBLE (and VERY VERY funny) !!!!

maybe some rhythmic dancing with ribbons could have helped.
jeeeesus.

If you want to be treated like an American GO THERE! Assuming you could make it!

Won't mean much when all the studios, production companies decide to make their project in another country...

As it is now we are on top of the world! If it ain't broke don't fix it.

ummmmm . Just what the industry needs. Moaning untalented actors. Great job guys keep up the good work.