no complexity in your rhymes try to hard to use metaphors say it like it is pimp more rhymin less thought about metaphors they'll come along.. try to make every fuckin word rhyme pimp you got decent flow step it up though mayne.. one
i want to fuck a chick on his back while traveling down a majestic river and then kill him eat him and sell his skin after fucking his eyesocket with a corkscrew
@seeker39m you're fuckin stupid this aint even real.. you a lame