I've never more wanted to grab a gun and walk into a building to hunt down someone who totally destroyed one fo the greatest rock songs of our...HOLY CRAP, WAS THAT KWAME FROM CAPTAIN PLANET???
By far, one of my favorite renditions on YouTube. Only weak spots are moving with a purpose (darting past Father was a bit jarring), dipping to catch the note (between "I" and "live") and choosing when to speak and when to sing ("...either way, it's more than I can bear to lose..."). But its ve...
Sounds like you have a talent for notes and singing, now you just need to really work on your diction and where your voice rests. You sound like a Baritone attempting to sing a Tenor song. If you really like the song, sing it a little lower, then flip to a weaker falsetto at the end of the song.
I've never more wanted to grab a gun and walk into a building to hunt down someone who totally destroyed one fo the greatest rock songs of our...HOLY CRAP, WAS THAT KWAME FROM CAPTAIN PLANET???