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Audio from the event would have added something but you did a really good job with the narration. You had some really good photos! I wasn't too excited about the fade transitions...it made think to much about what was going on in the next photo while it was in the middle of the transition. Your p...

It was fun seeing the costumes, and you did well at making a clear beginning, middle, and end with the narration. Might have been nice to hear from someone at the party, but this worked fine. I think it could have used a little more variety in photos--you have a lot of the midrange and couple wid...

Really good story. I think I would change the intro slides so their not in the first person--it makes it seem like he's making this, not you. The photos were good, and otherwise my only criticism is the length. It might be a good idea to cut out some of the more repetitive images that look the sa...

All the interviews were really fun, that was a great idea. I think cutting between those and photos was really abrupt though and distracting. I would also leave out the particle transitions and maybe include more photos or video instead. Good photos also with a good variety. Good job!

The video is great, I really like the variety you have and the different angles, and the audio sounds really good. It's a fun story. The only criticism I have is it seems like it takes a while into the video before I really understand what it's about--the beginning is just really sudden. Otherwis...