I would have gone in a different direction with the music. But then again, I wouldn't have wasted my time poorly Photoshoping multi-headed snakes in the first place
Very well done. The mood and feel of your version is a bit different then the original, which has allowed me to see this great song in a different light. JD would be proud. I always thought the line was "High beams in rain," not vain... oh well.
Next time I shit golf balls I'll be all set