10Tomomi

Your topic and what you explained about your topic were interesting, especially when you give us some ideas or pieces of advice; I am always impressed. You gave a lot of information that I hadnt expected. That was useful for me! However, you tended to speak without intonation when you felt nervou...

I felt that I was in a hurry because I was worried about time, so my presentation seemed less persuasive. I was able to use intonation more effectively than in my previous presentation because it was more organized and simpler. I shouldve organized my ideas better. However, I was less nervous tha...

I understand that you know a lot about squash from your presentation because you explained everything in detail. I think you can improve your voice volume and intonation. I still found it a little difficult to catch what you said especially at the end of sentences. However, it was much clearer th...

Your hook is interesting because I didnt expect you to have 5 boyfriends. You tended to touch your hair and hold your hands tightly when you felt nervous. In addition, it would have been persuasive if you hadnt sighed during your presentation. However you tried to make eye contact with everyone a...

I tried to speak clearly and slowly in this presentation in order to make me seem confident and make the audience understand easily. I think it was better than the ones that Ive done before. However I still speak flatly, so I should be careful about my intonation next time. Besides, there are som...

I was impressed with your video because you spoke differently from usual. You spoke naturally and calmly, so it was like a real advertisement of Emily Carr House. You didnt seem to be nervous at all. Personally, I wanted to know more details about this house. Good job!

It was interesting because I didnt have enough information about this castle even though I went there once before. I thought it would have been better if you had spoken loudly and also, it would be more exciting if you had used movies more. Good job!

I also enjoyed it ! Thank you for choosing me as a model! You must be a good painter! However, please treat a model sweetly...lol

The introduction of my presentation was nice because I spoke clearly and I seemed confident about this topic. However, I made a lot of grammar mistakes and I explained roughly because I hadnt practiced with cosmetics, so I was afraid of taking too long. Besides, the face of my model wearing makeu...

You spoke really clearly. I understand you have a lot of information about how to keep your hair healthy. However, you tended to talk with less intonation during the presentation. I felt it made you look nervous. I think this is a Japanese habit because we usually dont open our mouths when we spe...

Your posture in the presentation was nice and you tried to make eye contact with everybody.

Besides, I didnt see your nervous habit which is putting your hands behind your body because you moved your body to explain. I think it made you look less nervous. If you had used bigger pictures and rea...

I felt your mouth was little bit too close to the microphone because I sometimes couldnt get what you said. However, you used some special effects, like putting an arrow in the movie, fast-forwarding the movie, and using music. It was a nice way to get attention. Good job!!

I tried to use my body as much as I can. I think it was better than others that I did last month.

My problems in the presentation are intonation and choppy speech. It is improving, but it was still flat. Besides, I tended to speak fast when I felt nervous, so I had better practice by recording m...

Your movement was calm and it made me think that you were not nervous.

However, I think you can improve your voice volume and your intonation. Besides, you tended to talk about the same things repeatedly when you felt nervous. You could get attention more if you spoke enthusiastically and tried n...

Good job!!!!!

I spoke naturally because I wasnt so nervous. However, when I paused because of forgetting what I was supposed to say, I grabbed my hands tightly and my eye contact was toward the ceiling. Besides, I sometimes spoke fast and sometimes chopped my sentences.

However, it was better organized than t...

You didnt seem to be nervous, so it was natural. Your voice was loud enough and your speed was also easy to understand.

Besides, you were smiling all the time.

However I felt you tried to remember what you were supposed to say when you were speaking because you sometimes paused with an um sound....

You looked confident and spoke convincingly and naturally.

Sometimes I felt like you moved restlessly because of your foot step and hands grabbed.

However you talked to us really powerfully and expressed your emotion with your facial expression and intonation, so it was easy to understand and als...

I thought they were talking about their daughter, how they felt, how to spend their difficult time, so I just felt sorry for her. However, they sometimes said like daughter was killed??

Were they really kidding?

I also thought Asian dramas tend to be the same story. As he said, two people fall in love suddenly, then some obstacles appears, but they surmount these obstacles, finally one of them dies. Eventhough I know most of dramas are similar, I'm always moved by those!