awww thanks :) i hope he can create something a little more creative for his wife & kids... but you have to start with the basics :)

they're some nice shiny pots n pans.
looks pretty yummy.
you can cook... hmm, think you taught me a thing or two.
eli will be a great cook for sure.

just a self comment... missing my boy.... just another day really... another day closer.. but another day further... only want to make that gorgeous smile vibrant. Love you little man xxxx

ha there is about 6 different versions in that one film clip. i kind of like the sound of 48 seconds in to it.... and the very first one. 1:21 sort of sounds nice-ish for a verse... unsure on that one though. 2:27- maybe the intro... but would like to know what you think? have a few other vids, but its bad quality sound. getting a mates microfone hopefully to make it sound how it is.

Im confused as to which part you want, so if you can be a little more specific it would help.... just when you get time. thanks

the one thats been favourited.. its similar to 3?? you've put the 'pretty' into these! ya hit it!

ok so what video you talking about ... Eli3? just so i know where to kickstart it all..... and also get more structure. The verse leading into the chorus is going to be the hardest i think. That and the bridge; just depends on the tempo of the lyrics. Another thing to.... when you have a little bit of a guide to the lyrics (they dont have to be the actual lyrics) it will help build the song as well. Might be possible to have softer guitar and more vocals... depending on the overall tone of the song brings... if you know what i mean? But cool, will start to progress from there then. Thank-you

hey ! this is more like it..cant hear what ur saying but I like this...!!!!! Can work with this!!!!