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I liked the illustrations a lot! I thought they were really creative. My only suggestion would be to make the text not cover the illustrations. Good job!

I liked it a lot! I thought the illustrations were so creative. My only suggestion would be to make it so that the text did not cover the illustrations. Good job!

You did a fantastic job on this! My favorite was the cute little children kissing with the "no love?" caption. I can't really think of anything to criticize but maybe slow down the credits? Way to go.

I thought this was so cute and creative! I loved the illustrations and alliterations. The only thing that I would change, would be like you said, the static on your microphone. Otherwise it was perfect!

Seriously this was the cutest thing ever!! You did such a good job with the illustrations. I was in love with them! I can't really think of anything to critique it so maybe have the music go a little better with the mood of the poem? I don't know I thought it was fantastic!

Good job! I really liked how creative you were with the different pictures and representations of the letters. One piece of advice I have would be to increase the volume of your narration and decrease the volume of the music.