It has no music behind it. Its just a bunch of shit thrown together, to look like shit. you didnt even try to mold the shit into something nice. Just a pile of shit
@NinjaLocc Thanks for the comment! I'm always up for constructive criticism if you have some ideas for improvement. Please let me know where it sucks in detail. Still in my learning phase. Thanks for your time.
@gravetbh I'm great full you've asked. Just improved on the vocal sampling and use organic syths. But other than that you'll create a great track. Keep practicing and once you'll improve, sample this movie again. I think everyone needs constructive criticism. I'm glad you took my comment into consideration and in a positive manner. GOOD LUCK MATE!
I've seen this and your other pogo remixes and your ear for music really stands out but you make the same mistakes i keep seeing over and over. The difference between a pile of noise and a song made from sound is there but it feels too ruff like it's fighting to make you hear its a song insted of just being. That really the difference between people who slap something together and call it a remix and those like Jeesh, P.SUS. Your on the cusp of something Great I look forward too when you find it
@Inkmonkey7 Thanks, I'm working on improving my sound and structure. I am going to get a midi controller soon hopefully it helps. Thanks again for the comment! Best Regards!
. . . . . . .. . . ..... . Life always makes oneself discover transcendental things on our paths that make a before and after paragraph about the day, month, year, life... this made my day and it will be a fountain of inspiration in my realm for the rest of my existence. Really , really apreciated it. Keep it up for the sake of dreaming.
@Yunisilebraid Wow! that really made my day. I really appreciate your comment. I will keep it up with the hope of creating enjoyment for people who find my works. Your comment is why I try to create. I think you have seen the deeper meaner of the vid. Thanks again for the comment. Peace.
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kittehmonstaa 1 week ago
It has no music behind it. Its just a bunch of shit thrown together, to look like shit. you didnt even try to mold the shit into something nice. Just a pile of shit
thatstheway53 1 week ago
@thatstheway53 well, that was mean. At least you could have given him some criticism that would have helped him improve....whatever.
Winxin864 1 day ago
@Winxin864 I did, I gave him the idea to atleast mold the shit to look like something nice.
thatstheway53 5 hours ago
hey i just wanted to say good job! Because you suck.
DjBiGBiRD92 1 month ago
if the "rectify" was more melodic itd have been a lot better, but it was pretty decent. off to a good start
kurukq 1 month ago
It's got a bit of a rugged start, but as it goes on through it gets a lot better.
BlockisticStudios 2 months ago
too much clutter in the sound
candyqueenify 3 months ago
God damn, that beat at 1:25 is beyond sick.
MysticGizmos 3 months ago
Too simple, monotonic and the begining is really annoing its just bad.
bubiziom 3 months ago
0:43-1:45 is great it might last too long in fact...there are distinct 'parts' of the song, and its missing a lot of flow.
I really hope you redo this with what you know now, but keep this up just for comparison.
I look forward to it.
brunswickbass888 3 months ago
its a start... but you definitely need some practice
Goodforrj 3 months ago
It's good, man. A little repetitive, but much better than what I can do.
Zfernbaugh 5 months ago
lol i kept hearing "chocolate, fridays."
AlexMercerConsumptio 5 months ago
horrible
peanutreyna 5 months ago
I think the loops starting at 1:06 is the best of what i've seen from you so far.
dainumo 6 months ago
@gofantage Wow! thank you so much!
gravetbh 8 months ago
i really liked this man... it may not be the clearest it still has a good base line. Honestly keep up the good work
TNAralwaysfun 8 months ago 2
@TNAralwaysfun Thanks for the comment, I'm still learning. I hope my next one will be better.
gravetbh 8 months ago
I agree with HLimmen, that 1:08 to 1:45 is amazing, I keep listening to it over and over. Keep up the good work!
Chenamatic 9 months ago 4
@Chenamatic Thanks for the comment! I do really appreciate it!
gravetbh 9 months ago
@Chenamatic
I agree
takara2 8 months ago
This video and your talent, they're both like uncut diamonds. Precious, but rough around the edges. Great analogy? Great analogy.
Keep working at what you do, its coming along good so far :)
phase866 9 months ago
@phase866 Wow! thank you so much for the thoughtful comment I really appreciate your time and input!
gravetbh 9 months ago
1:08 til 1:45 was fucking awesome. The rest felt out of sync.
HLimmen 9 months ago
Dude this fucking sucks
NinjaLocc 10 months ago
@NinjaLocc Thanks for the comment! I'm always up for constructive criticism if you have some ideas for improvement. Please let me know where it sucks in detail. Still in my learning phase. Thanks for your time.
gravetbh 10 months ago 8
@gravetbh I'm great full you've asked. Just improved on the vocal sampling and use organic syths. But other than that you'll create a great track. Keep practicing and once you'll improve, sample this movie again. I think everyone needs constructive criticism. I'm glad you took my comment into consideration and in a positive manner. GOOD LUCK MATE!
NinjaLocc 10 months ago
I've seen this and your other pogo remixes and your ear for music really stands out but you make the same mistakes i keep seeing over and over. The difference between a pile of noise and a song made from sound is there but it feels too ruff like it's fighting to make you hear its a song insted of just being. That really the difference between people who slap something together and call it a remix and those like Jeesh, P.SUS. Your on the cusp of something Great I look forward too when you find it
Inkmonkey7 10 months ago
@Inkmonkey7 Thanks, I'm working on improving my sound and structure. I am going to get a midi controller soon hopefully it helps. Thanks again for the comment! Best Regards!
gravetbh 10 months ago
. . . . . . .. . . ..... . Life always makes oneself discover transcendental things on our paths that make a before and after paragraph about the day, month, year, life... this made my day and it will be a fountain of inspiration in my realm for the rest of my existence. Really , really apreciated it. Keep it up for the sake of dreaming.
Yunisilebraid 10 months ago
@Yunisilebraid Wow! that really made my day. I really appreciate your comment. I will keep it up with the hope of creating enjoyment for people who find my works. Your comment is why I try to create. I think you have seen the deeper meaner of the vid. Thanks again for the comment. Peace.
gravetbh 10 months ago