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[TeamAmerica9]

each charactor looks like my shit the next day after a thanksgiving feast ahaha

[TheLightInTheShadows]

aww, poor Locke doesn't stand a chance

[Danyukhin]

Seen it at an animation festival this weekend, liked it the most!

[ironjunia]

@Danyukhin hey thanks!

But could you give me more info on this animation festival? What was is called, and where?

I have not submitted my film to any festivals so i'm kind of confused by this..!

[Danyukhin]

@ironjunia Yeeah, it was a freepass animation night in a quiet club in russia=] No profit, just a bit of unlicensed public exhibition)

[wintermute579]

That was...pretty cool :) I wondered what it would have bee like if there had been any talking in it, but then that might have ruined it; sometimes all you need is a good soundtrack (good choice on that one btw). Wouldnt mind seeing more of those two, made me laugh.

[Dorgenark1]

I like your unique style!

[FireStarDoink]

Cute :D

[NyaNyaNinichan]

XD okay i really like that one! really good, cool and funny story!! also love the style and the music just fits great!!! :D

[serku]

XD That was really good!

[jellybeanguitarist]

teehee i giggled at the end XD

[moggiye]

wow great work lol the idea xD

[missfmalulu]

WOW! Great work!

[bobbyfasel]

that was awesome!!!! keep it up :)

good animation, but the backgrounds stick out as 3d. that's my only crit! looks pretty sweet :)

[Shinobug]

LOVED IT.

The music was perfect <3

[hanechan123]

Great!!! I love it. It's a really good job :)

[SeverinaKatran]

WAAA!!!)))

[beastgirlsara]

sheerly awesome

[Rillian555]

Nice animation and great humor. Love it! :)

[IshudaAtsuki]

THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS! it was great! 5stars!+subscribe!

[miriimp]

Really nice work, love how even without dialog the personalities shine. Great colors, music rocks :-) and plots got punch. Very nice Bebop/Trigun influence too. Hope it got you a nice grade, in addition to being a great portfolio piece.

[sforzie]

Very nice work. The animation is smooth, and the art style you used for this reminds me somewhat of the animation for more recent FF7 anime things. (They remind me a bit of the Turks.) It works well, and the Trigun music is a nice touch!

I wish I had the patience/talent for this sort of thing! :D Kudos, and best of luck in school. :)

[Hyula]

Hey there, it's TowelGirl from Y!~ Jus tletting you know once more time that I thought this was awesome! And I agree with Rayfield, this does have some BeBop quality to it, (though it's definitely unique, too) :3

[Vektor1987]

Great Job =)

[LoneSousuke]

haha it made me laugh so hard! awesome work!

[CeilidhDarrah19]

wow!! Love it! you could do that for a liveing!!! Keep it up!

[kawaii50]

Stunning! The characters are enduring and a person certainly wants to get to know more about them. Your months of hard work has resulted in one awesome piece.

[MidnightSong87]

Very cool!

By the way, I first saw your artwork on Deviant Art, then found some more artwork on Livejournal, but I didn't realize the two accounts were for the same person. And now I've found you yet again! I feel like such an accidental stalker. XD

[thecookietheory]

This is amazing. xD I love this kind of side-scroll animation; it's classic and crisp. Well done!

[RayfieldA]

Nice. Kinda reminds me of good ol BeBop! I there anyway to see a tutorial on how you designed the backgrounds? Was it all done in photoshop?

[ComicRandomness]

THAT WAS AWSOME

[thehenchcroft]

i concur with yaoivideomaker, that was great!

[redsun1211]

that is awesome

[ROB27849]

dude this was sweet i thought it was funny too

[edward19cullen01]

how do you do it? i was thinkng about making one sorta like urs but idk how.

[Ligerjet]

I enjoyed it and thought it was really pretty cool. :3

[ivorycricket]

the art is so...edgy.

c:

and the irony is cuute.

[caiti5689]

this was such a pleasure to watch~

[Komapsunida]

You are amazing! <3

[YaoiVideomaker]

great!

[fellijnh]

I totally love the ending! It's awesome!

[NymphNerissa]

Nice... I loved it, especially the small plot. The fight scene was done very well and the whole thing amused me... wish I could do something like that.

[KitsuneArasi]

Delightful work.

^^

[Rahmemhotep]

dude thts fuckin cool <3

[kanillam]

:O

Amazing!

[jayhogg152]

Very nice. keep up the great work.

[HamelDemon]

omh!! amazing work!! >O> it's sooo cute and funny ♥

[Abbers1205]

AMAZING

[Nirewolf]

Wonderful! ^_^ I hope to see more of your animation in the future!

[kutyusREX]

OMG. Amazing. Far more entertaining than some of the movies that have come out recently XD

[45678ret]

you are a good animator

[heartofShou]

That's awesome!  Everything went so smooth! And I love your character design! Will you do anything else with these two characters? I would totally want a sequel! ^_^

[CRdreamer]

That is fantastic! will you be continuing shorts about these two? I've watched twice now and find myself wanting to know more about the characters and what they're doing now. ^_^*

[dardasonet]

amazing! i'm speechless *-*

[LyNx9mm]

4 words : awesome , in my favourites

[fghshfhhdffgdh]

nice

[Basilherb]

Heh, I think it was very funny. A good short, silly, and most of the movement was very smooth. Not hard to watch at all. Also funny how they ended up as friends in the end. Final thought: Everyone is wanted in the town! XD

[ShadowCharmer]

lol wow, that's awesome!

[Sesshyfan1121]

One of the best original animations I've seen in some time! Very well done, indeed!

[lunseisleidee]

Questions arise.... 1. If they're both criminals, how is it supposed to make sense that they'd hunt each other since anyway they both end up jailed if they go to the police office? 2. If they're in jail, how did they manage to have such big sacks of money with them? I know it's the reward but it doesn't make much sense. XD 3. The animations are way too slow and they walk in an awkward way. Was it intentional?

I'm giving this 3 stars. You've done an awesome job. I like the blackhaired one.

[ironjunia]

The animations are too slow? Could you tell me what you mean?

I do know the walk cycles are bad, I didn't have time to fix it before it was due, and... well, it was time to be done with this project.

The rest of your questions I considered while making it, but it's just a silly short cartoon. the critiques I received from my professors understood the story just fine being slapstick and ridiculous, so please use your imagination!

[lunseisleidee]

Well, by "the animations are too slow" I mean.... that the animations are too slow. XD I mean all the movements of the characters are as if they're slowed down, such as if someone run the movie with a 0.8x speed. That's just my personal impression of course.

[ironjunia]

That's really strange, with the exception of the intro, I see a lot of the scenes as going by very fast, that's why I asked. I was wondering if there's something wrong with the upload, but lol, nevermind.

[lunseisleidee]

The scenes - are fast. But it's the movements of the characters which aren't quite as smooth as those of an human being. :P Still my humble opinion, mind you.

[derekchow1]

Hell no! It was awesome, one of the best in our class. We only had a few months to knock it out, on top of other classes. The speed is fine, nice and laid back to go with the song.

[squirrel568]

The best animation I've seen at SVA yet... well Ben may change that come the Dusty's but otherwise you hold the top spot. Amazing work 5/5. I love the Trigun/Cowboy Bebop feel.

[IdleBigots]

haha, one of the best short animations I've seen in a long time.

[TheHighMage]

Tha's really cool, love the storyline. you should have it made into an actual series, I'd so watch it.

XD

[SaigonInk]

This is soooooooo awesome! You did it all by yourself?

If so: AWESOME!

I just love it!

[ShyMagical]

Niiiiiiiice <3

[magiasyuy]

omg this is ridiculous XD they caught themselves...and then gave away their money.... awesome! :D You're better then some guys in animation i saw Monday!

[sweetsbunny]

We love you Lindsay!!!!

[DLGR]

Dude, that was waaay better than your last one. I swear everytime I re-catch up with you you're 1928934027483241-times better than the last time I checked out your stuff. U-R-AWESOMESAUCE!

I really liked this. See that? It's in my Favorites. XDDDD!!!

[PeteHarshnish]

Linds i'm so proud of you! It's such an amazing improvement over one year and I am stunned. Can't wait to see you again!!!!!

[ksporkie]

This came out awesome~! I especially love the bar with the chairs and walls pieced together with random pieces of metal. And the fight was adorable, too~!

*fangirls*

[munniekins]

Lol, wow this is amazing! Love the story line/plot.

[Larkfanatic]

Awesome!

[rinjin07]

that was awesome man! ugh, i want to go to animation school.

[Tcsei]

Haha! I like it- I really do! The stylistic fluidity of the movements was very attractive.

[Brie2230]

Ahahaha!!! This was AMAZING!!! Very awesome story line and animation! :D

[Lucrecia84]

Dear god, that was absolutely stunning O_O

I'm so in awe!

[rietalienko]

That was absolutely amazing! I loved it! <333 The animations were really smooth too. I'm inspired, definitely.

[Ryoukitten]

XD That was good! Nice job^^