Wow, amazing! I just read the whole story in several hours today and I love it! I was just checking your channel, but I don´t believe there is a sequel already or did I miss it? Please make a sequel!!
i just loved your story, i never left a comment before because i just read the all story in a hour or 2 so i kept reading and because this was the end i decided to comment and i'll check your other story and see if i do more comments...
i hope you keep writing awesome story's like this one
this was so good and it would be cool if u made a sequel. i never read deserted but when i get a chance i will. but hang on...wasnt aly coming on tour with them? loll im confused a little...but still ur stories r so good!
aw, i thought it was cute! make a sequel! can't wait 'till Departed! oh and, when does that come out? btw, I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! what's the other story going to be about? r u going to make a sequel to midnight break-in? PLEASE say yes!!
like..... hmmmmmmm...... how do i explain it lol. Like the Jonas Brothers have a banner on their vids above the description box. and miley and mandy had the M&M crew one..... hope you know what i'm talking about now lol
Wow, amazing! I just read the whole story in several hours today and I love it! I was just checking your channel, but I don´t believe there is a sequel already or did I miss it? Please make a sequel!!
Sharsel92 1 year ago
i thought aly wis going with them???
peteyluv1 1 year ago
it just startedd! ahhh!
JonasforFREE 2 years ago
is this the end?
moviesgalore100 2 years ago
You've gotta make a sequel! The story is so short and there's this vibe in me saying there has gotta be more!
filipgurl 2 years ago 2
please make a sequel i loved it to much for it to end
twinerd23 2 years ago 2
Is there a sequel?!
Yajaira
TheTwilightTwins232 2 years ago 2
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Please, Please, Please make a SEQUEL!!!!!!!
mizzcori 2 years ago 2
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mizzcori 2 years ago
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!
JonasAddiction24 2 years ago 2
r u ever gonna make a sequel i mean its already january
luvergrl02 3 years ago 2
DONT END IT!!!
winkylink 3 years ago 2
I love this story. I really hope you'll make something just like this.
Andse2 3 years ago
that wasnt a great ending no offense of course its a fantastic story but they are all too short also im sorryD:
girroxmysox1023 3 years ago
MAKE A SEQUEL! PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!
avneet186 3 years ago 2
What?!?! It's over just like that? Well....
xginnixmariex42x 3 years ago
guys please read irishdancer626's series its so good and clever! its so awesome!
cassyday18 3 years ago
Hey, If you need any characters for the love story the name his Jessica *wink*wink*
jk, This story is great.
JonasGurl4Life4Ever 3 years ago
i cant wait for departure so bad....
roXXstarSS 3 years ago
hey,in the future do
a sequel plz.?
i love this story!
iheartnickjonas310 3 years ago
DAMN!!! u are SOOOOOOOO good at writing stories with JB in them... PLZ MAKE MORE TALKING ABOUT THEIR 'SISTER'!!!!!!!!!!!!
SeaWorld5544 3 years ago 2
Why would you end it there?I liked this a lot!!!!!:(Now I have to be all blah the rest of the day.:(
NatureGirl118 3 years ago
ooohhhh, i'm so sad it's over...
i just loved your story, i never left a comment before because i just read the all story in a hour or 2 so i kept reading and because this was the end i decided to comment and i'll check your other story and see if i do more comments...
i hope you keep writing awesome story's like this one
Filipa3591 3 years ago
hi that was really good can you send me the others
yvonnebrown613 3 years ago
you should make a sequel!
OJDpatientx15 3 years ago
yea a sequal!!!!
bubbleboo202 3 years ago
I don't know about the sequel.
It was an awesome story and you ended it on a good spot.
Thanks for an awesome story :)
PeppermintDom 3 years ago
this was so good and it would be cool if u made a sequel. i never read deserted but when i get a chance i will. but hang on...wasnt aly coming on tour with them? loll im confused a little...but still ur stories r so good!
OJDpatient3 3 years ago
absolutely loved it!!!!
wowxxurcool135 3 years ago
I love it!!
JonasGurl4Life4Ever 3 years ago
lovedd itt!!!
xVxHASxOJDx 3 years ago
please make a sequel!! it's too awesome not too!!
i can't wait for the next one
Smofey91 3 years ago
it a force of habit to write i can't wait for the next one so sorry but i hope there is a next one :]
Smofey91 3 years ago
haha there could be in the future........ :)
liygirl55643 3 years ago
LOVED IT!!!
JoBroLuvr42708 3 years ago
aw, i thought it was cute! make a sequel! can't wait 'till Departed! oh and, when does that come out? btw, I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! what's the other story going to be about? r u going to make a sequel to midnight break-in? PLEASE say yes!!
Jonasbrothers1250 3 years ago
This was really good and you should do the sequel!
-luv your stories!
KCJonaslovers235 3 years ago
that was amazingness you should deff make a sequal =)
beautifulblond333 3 years ago
aly os going on tour with them in the summer because aly has to go to school...
ckookie12 3 years ago
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!! =D
AshleysStories 3 years ago
wasnt aly going on tour with her? i LOVED this series! it was so cool! and i cant wait for departed!
brittarmybrat 3 years ago
what do you mean by banners?
zipper921z2 3 years ago
like..... hmmmmmmm...... how do i explain it lol. Like the Jonas Brothers have a banner on their vids above the description box. and miley and mandy had the M&M crew one..... hope you know what i'm talking about now lol
liygirl55643 3 years ago
ooo i thought you meant like a picture for you series like to put in your videos
zipper921z2 3 years ago
OMG!! ur stories are really good!!!
totallyluvinJB123 3 years ago
yay cute ending!
doggysareawsome 3 years ago
i really like this story!
i hope you do a sequel!?! please?
jobub11 3 years ago
hope you can make a sequel! and i definitely can't wait for Departed!
madison50364 3 years ago