Death Note - Alternate Ending (FanFiction) - Kira's Victory! Vol.1

[Wumbofish]

Lights victory: mikami should have put out 1 page from the real dn and put it in again that day that all happened

I would do that cause id expect something like that what near did

[Lightningtoe]

Near is actually 19 years old at this time. Not a kid

[Lightningtoe]

@HecticEthnic You are a genius. But Light did not know about that rule about the misspelling, because shinigami have no obligation to explain to the human all of the rules

[HecticEthnic]

Do you know how Light should've truly won in this version? Swap or give Mekumi the REAL notebook pages from a notebook with Light's Name written INCORRECTLY 4 times. That will make the death note have no effect on him whatsoever. He then anticipates the betrayal. Everyone in the room dies except Light and Mekumi. Light goes to one of the agent's guns and shoots Mekumi as he re-writes his name or he writes Mekumi's name in his watch's DN, or writes it on Mekumi's after taking it by force (gun)

[jasim1996]

8:29 near may llok like a kid,but hes 21 year old man

[NoKruddz]

(Y) 5/5

[Insomnia1234o00o]

stupid



[bigskeeter505]

Disgustingly horrible. characters are completely out of character, perceptions of each character are misconstrued, its as if they're different people with different goals. Re-do otherwise if this is meant as a comedy you've done magnificently

[ARKAINISS]

then light got so suprised and slipped on the wet bathroom tiles then light died there because his head went straight threw the pipe then misa did some nasty things with his body and called the cops........ and commits suicide .....sorry for the bad spellling t

[ARKAINISS]

the new rule/ability that light found is that he can kill them instantly instead of the forty second wait he had to give ryuk a quarter of his lifespan before near took the deathnote and left whent back to his house and laughed for forty minuites then he remembered where misa was and went to pick her up when light went into the motel room that she was staying in he felt an odd presents and heard something in the bathroom he went to check it out and it was misa naked coming out the shower then

[ARKAINISS]

my alternate ending starts at the beggining and changes from i am justice i am l's at 05:15 instead of light saying well aizawa its simple he says he did fail you wanna know why?

[near].why

[light].four reasons ........ 1 is because im always one step ahead of you 2 is beacause i bought a bigger watch 3 is i have found out a new deathnote rule and 4 i bought the eyes and light writes all of there names down in the cut of deathnote paper in his watch and killz every one including mikami the

[SunSparkle129]

..........what the hell..........?

[demoniccurses9]

okay, maybe I'm the first who noticed this but what has the title anything to do with the content of the video?

[Johnny2071]

And then Light decides that he killed enough people, and briefly dies all of those deaths?

[Hikaripop]

This is interesting, but I don't like Light, so I can't really stay focused since it's his victory.

[SpaceMedafighterEx]

Yeah I wish Light somehow pulled this off

[legendaryone696]

i like the twist, the text was a little hard to read though.

[warlock776]

I think it's a bit silly how Mikami decided to betray Raito, and Raito was expecting him to but still pretty cool

[WhitePeace000]

cool!!! not bad, not bad at all. 5/5:)

[Sac077]

Wow dude this is really good