Wilfred Owen - The Parable of the Old Man and the Young

[Olafandlafandlaf]

I had a shot at doing it, I must say but, you're accent is so much more appropriate, compared to my Glaswegian drawl.

[Olafandlafandlaf]

You've made a few mistakes and some of the lines you stop at odd times. It was an almost perfect reading but for those things. And the last two lines, you make a mistake in the second last one - 'But the old man would not so, but slew his son.'

Sorry. I love this poem and your voice is perfect for it, just you make some painfukl mistakes.