Law and Order: SVU FanFiction!

[Eppybiz7]

Make another one please! Great story!!

[zanessa024]

awsome

[KACIE681]

That was Awesome. Except for the part where Kathy shots Liv. I am so glad Liv is okay. That was good though. This really shows how much El LOVES Liv. <3

[jarofdirt1234]

okay i have read this!!!!!!

[trendyrbd]

love it!!

[TheSacrificialMaiden]

It needs some editing. There are a lot of spelling mistakes and tense errors (you keep switching between present tense and past tense). The plot is good though. I HATE HATE HATE that song!

[DanMarie96]

amazing

[ILoveB52s]

OMG,...SO emotional! SO awesome!!!!

[mariskalover44]

that was good

[LAWANDORDERSVU101]

great the best.

[karihighman]

That would make for a suspenseful episode if that happened! Oh my gosh, SO great! You should definitly make video number 2

[mynameisandie]

That was awsome. u should definately make another one!!! i'm gona subscribe.

[oliviabensonfanatic]

thanks =D

[milkyash]

Make a video that would be cool

[hotmiley777]

omg if that were an episode on law & order svu i would go crazy abd the part where elliot says kathy is hecksa true.i think liv needs 2 lay of the pain in front of elliot.jk

[aaa0sss]

PLEASE MAKE #2. its a great Story.

love it.

[milkyash]

PuT a number 2 this was GREAT!!! PLEASEEE !!!!

[oliviabensonfanatic]

ill try... thank you =D

[bobdaspy]

Omg well done !!!!

It rocks

Keep writing more svu fanfictions

well done

[passi0nfight3r101]

that stupid bitch!

i would of shot her ass and leave her to die in the dirt!

i wanna kill that homicide piece of shit right now!

lol exuse my launguage but i was so

pissed when i found out kathy shot olivia.

i wanted to hunt down her ass and kill her myself!

lol awesome.amazing.fantastic.!!!!­!

[oliviabensonfanatic]

lmao... seriously! thanks :)

[DjGemzi2k8]

Your good at this :)

You've got such a talent, just keep writing and you'll get even better.

Bt the way, what's the song?

[oliviabensonfanatic]

Lips of and Angel by Hinder

thanks ;)

[DjGemzi2k8]

Thank you very much :)

[livsgurl16]

umm liv needs 2 stop getting hurt well at least she's not gonna die this tym but that was really gud with the chart thing cause i was bout 2 cry 4 a minute

[Citydogz45]

if u like csi check out my fan fiction i hope u like it after im done wit that then im doin ncis

[mewmewchocolate13]

btw the way they shouldn't have been suprised to see her in ICU. almost everyone who just went through surgery is amitted to Intensive care.

[OrangeF1zz]

So am I. ;) Just keep on practicing your writing.

[xXAmmyNicoleXx]

im about to turn 13 and i tought it was really good. i love writing too(: and law and order.. and e/o ... lol

[mewmewchocolate13]

I absolutly loved it

[mariska13hargitay]

.GREAT.!

[bflowerbabs]

wow that was scary i think you should make one that elliot has an afair with danny and olivia catches them,ect.

[favoritedrug3]

I love it!!! it was awesome!!

[superwai7]

LOL! I loved it! it was awesome

[lovemarish]

Hilarious !

Kathy a crazed killer lol