I liked this one best, it had an ending that maid sence although the other had way better animation this gave a stronger felling of pain and suffering.
Far, far, FAR superiour ending. IMMEASURABLY better.
Why on EARTH did you abandon that in the final project?? Frankly, the "completed" movie left me wondering exactly what I should believe or think of... Well, everything, really. Every good story has "sides," not necessarily of good and evil, but definite sides which the readers/viewers should be able to identify. Purged ended with me unsure as to which side I was really on.
This animatic, however, is very clear in that regard. Much better.
Okay, if you guys want to find out more about the angel and what the story is really about, Mr Lee has some pre-production art on his DeviantArt that can explain more. Hands up if you love this piece; it's an interesting story with an unforgettable protagonist and the inclusion of unique surrealism.
@Doommafia1 the apple respresents the sins we make in life. the angel is being tempted to eat it by the others...when he crushed it, he was free from this temptation and earned his wings.
Yeah, this ending is WAY better - if you had added this at the end of the actual short - people would understand the plot more - even though it still is unclear as to why these "angels" are being the temptresses - the concept is a lot clearer.
So it's like crushing temptation crushes the root of evil itself? (Crushing the apple crushes the creepy demon-ladies) And when you do that it will set you free. But you can't just deny it, and ignore it. You have to fight back against it. Sort of like issues with poverty and peace, there's no good in saying "I don't cause war and poverty, therefore it's okay." That's not good enough, you have to crush it.
Even though it's more rough, I think I like this version better. It seems to make more sense. I think the angel is supposed to be female because in the finished version it looks like it has a bosom, but I read some comments calling it a he, so IDK.
I think the apples represent sin and/or temptation. The apple truing rotten represent how deceptive sin is. It can look completely harmless, even beautiful or appealing, but look closer and it's a vile, disgusting thing. In the end, it's very bitter.
amazing is the only word that describes this even as rough as it is i wish you would have continued and made a non cliff hanger ending on the finished version
We're going to see something of yours in theaters some day huh? I mean you've got the amazing talent, a directors sounding name and just all around fantasticness.
wow this was actually more amazing then the finished one, you should really ad that last part if you ever have the time. The finished one ends a bit to abrubtly, its still amazing work though
I enjoyed the animation, but after seeing this clip, I think this would suit much better as an ending rather than a cliffhanger. But it's good stuff mate :D
I do like this ending better; it explains more. So he was cast out of heaven, and all the apples represent sin? When he crushed the apple, it represented him not giving in to the evil and corruption all around him, even though he was tempted to bite into it. He redeemed himself.
i actually love both...both left me thinking that we have to chose even if there's a wrong choice and a right one we must live with it...i do love the animation and the music just adds the feeling to it...overall i say good work! you left me amazed
this is so much better than the original movie. You should have forgot about all the flashy fancy pretty graphics stuff and just did this to begin with man.
"Synopsis: The story follows an angel named Tira who's banished from heaven for rejecting her peers way of life. She ends up in purgatory and while she wanders the endless grey fields, heaven tempts her to join them once again. She destroys heaven within herself and falls back to the fields of grey. Now with Purgatory as her blank canvas, she creates her own heaven as she sees fit." (James Lee, deviantart)
@ittooklongtomakethis "Synopsis: The story follows an angel named Tira who's banished from heaven for rejecting her peers way of life. She ends up in purgatory and while she wanders the endless grey fields, heaven tempts her to join them once again. She destroys heaven within herself and falls back to the fields of grey. Now with Purgatory as her blank canvas, she creates her own heaven as she sees fit." (James Lee, deviantart)
wow. what a treat to be able to see more of the ending that you had in mind.....
CaramelCleo 2 months ago
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I'm just gonna say... this makes one hell of a lot more sense than the actual film.
KyiKyo95 2 months ago
i like this ending more
megalol322 6 months ago
I liked this one best, it had an ending that maid sence although the other had way better animation this gave a stronger felling of pain and suffering.
growgirl123 7 months ago
YES MORE JAMESLEE ANIMATION!!!
Chron25 8 months ago
Uh, this one's alot better...
Gearz86 8 months ago
what animation programe does u use
petziey 9 months ago
@petziey
probably adobe flash
TheJoshFernzGuy 8 months ago
really creative :)))))))))) by italy
APPLEHIFI 9 months ago
Amazing work! I like this version better tho.
hck112 10 months ago
This ending is so much mor ebetter and happier, the old one left me hangin
BleepBleepization 10 months ago
Far, far, FAR superiour ending. IMMEASURABLY better.
Why on EARTH did you abandon that in the final project?? Frankly, the "completed" movie left me wondering exactly what I should believe or think of... Well, everything, really. Every good story has "sides," not necessarily of good and evil, but definite sides which the readers/viewers should be able to identify. Purged ended with me unsure as to which side I was really on.
This animatic, however, is very clear in that regard. Much better.
AdamNovagen 10 months ago
where can i get the song???
TheRevProdigy777 10 months ago
This version of the story is actually much better.
Robloxian201 10 months ago
Okay, if you guys want to find out more about the angel and what the story is really about, Mr Lee has some pre-production art on his DeviantArt that can explain more. Hands up if you love this piece; it's an interesting story with an unforgettable protagonist and the inclusion of unique surrealism.
gothtaly 10 months ago
Souless Paradise? was that the old title?
RoastedStix 10 months ago
Please put a download link to the music!
xBlueWinter 10 months ago
scotch-korean man, its all so scotch korean.
Lexrockstheblock 10 months ago
wow she/he rlly dont like apples
Doommafia1 10 months ago
@Doommafia1 the apple respresents the sins we make in life. the angel is being tempted to eat it by the others...when he crushed it, he was free from this temptation and earned his wings.
BlizzardEye1996 10 months ago
@BlizzardEye1996 dang now it makes sense makes this animation the more enjoyable thanks dude
Doommafia1 10 months ago
@Doommafia1 im a girl but yeah ur welcome :)
BlizzardEye1996 10 months ago
@BlizzardEye1996 The angel is a girl.Her name's Tira.
RikaKatsuki 10 months ago
1 guy clicked the wrong button
madhatterdead 10 months ago
You really should be thinking about finishing this.. the actual piece without the actual ending makes no sense..
BlizzardEye1996 10 months ago
Moral: Temptation is much weaker then will
Extremely well made plot, ending made everything understandable, a very good animation in all, make more animations like this
Darkari33 10 months ago
Yeah, this ending is WAY better - if you had added this at the end of the actual short - people would understand the plot more - even though it still is unclear as to why these "angels" are being the temptresses - the concept is a lot clearer.
GaeanMiskui 10 months ago
So it's like crushing temptation crushes the root of evil itself? (Crushing the apple crushes the creepy demon-ladies) And when you do that it will set you free. But you can't just deny it, and ignore it. You have to fight back against it. Sort of like issues with poverty and peace, there's no good in saying "I don't cause war and poverty, therefore it's okay." That's not good enough, you have to crush it.
Pables1994 10 months ago
Oh wow.. I do hope you decide to finish it. The ending looks very great..
Really loved this piece.
BethInuzuka 10 months ago
Continued:
Even though the angel desired the apple/sin, she was able to look past it's deceptive appearance and see it for what it is.
she did not gave in, even though it was hard, she resisted the temptation and was redeemed.
I think the removing of the halo/collar and the wings at the end represent freedom.
The angel has been redeemed now. She's no longer in bondage to sin, temptation and regret. She's free to return to paradise now.
Just my thoughts/interpretation.
NoviLunar 10 months ago 3
Even though it's more rough, I think I like this version better. It seems to make more sense. I think the angel is supposed to be female because in the finished version it looks like it has a bosom, but I read some comments calling it a he, so IDK.
I think the apples represent sin and/or temptation. The apple truing rotten represent how deceptive sin is. It can look completely harmless, even beautiful or appealing, but look closer and it's a vile, disgusting thing. In the end, it's very bitter.
NoviLunar 10 months ago
amazing is the only word that describes this even as rough as it is i wish you would have continued and made a non cliff hanger ending on the finished version
leonstar4 10 months ago
I like this ending much better - I understand it.
TheGreySentinel 10 months ago
We're going to see something of yours in theaters some day huh? I mean you've got the amazing talent, a directors sounding name and just all around fantasticness.
TheSinfulFreedom 10 months ago
wow this was actually more amazing then the finished one, you should really ad that last part if you ever have the time. The finished one ends a bit to abrubtly, its still amazing work though
lapamjuka 10 months ago
Ohh with the ending, it makes much more sense! :3
aWavesong 10 months ago
I enjoyed the animation, but after seeing this clip, I think this would suit much better as an ending rather than a cliffhanger. But it's good stuff mate :D
cboylegend 10 months ago
I think this story made a bit more scene to me than the finished on on da.
rosebaylover 10 months ago
this is soooo cooool. animation is amazing. i hope it can continue
shadowthecat971 10 months ago
not even needing to mention the final product which is beutifull, this is better than most things on newgrounds in general (meaning just this)
megakirbymon 10 months ago
I do like this ending better; it explains more. So he was cast out of heaven, and all the apples represent sin? When he crushed the apple, it represented him not giving in to the evil and corruption all around him, even though he was tempted to bite into it. He redeemed himself.
LonerGalore 10 months ago 3
i actually love both...both left me thinking that we have to chose even if there's a wrong choice and a right one we must live with it...i do love the animation and the music just adds the feeling to it...overall i say good work! you left me amazed
mariposhy93 10 months ago
yea, prefer this ending.. leaves a better after-feeling.
eryca2 10 months ago 4
Awww this ending I loved more D:
Your animation was beautiful! I loved it!
wingedprinceofrose 10 months ago 3
this is so much better than the original movie. You should have forgot about all the flashy fancy pretty graphics stuff and just did this to begin with man.
OffhandDelivery 10 months ago 8
So nice to know that we can watch another 1 of your animations....... I can't wait for Tarboy 2 now !!!!!!!!!
lococheekan 10 months ago
loved it
dresmasher 10 months ago
If I understand this right then my god, this is quite Morbid!
I would love to read/watch a commentary on the thoughts and feelings behind this one
TheDuckCow 10 months ago
hmm
bredlei 10 months ago
I actually like this ending much better...
Rathdrgnknight 10 months ago 146
@Rathdrgnknight Same here.
Robloxian201 10 months ago
EPIC LOOKING! I cant wait to see you stick it on Newgrounds as the final version, I would rate as much as I can.
JustAtyper 11 months ago
@JustAtyper wait, didn't he already release Purged almost a year ago?
LinkEX 11 months ago
amazing and this is my second favorite my favorite is tarboy
rpmmelby 11 months ago
It's religious I think because the apple is the forbidden fruit and those chicks are tempting him to eat it. just a guess.
ittooklongtomakethis 11 months ago 47
@ittooklongtomakethis Of course it's based on religion, it's called purged, as in purgatory!
hermiobother 10 months ago
@ittooklongtomakethis
'chicks'?! friend you have a very sick definition of 'chicks'
svnelvn 10 months ago
@ittooklongtomakethis It's a girl
kimahrikara 10 months ago
@kimahrikara sorry
ittooklongtomakethis 10 months ago
@ittooklongtomakethis Although I can appreciate the symbolism... The forbidden fruit was not an apple.
laschea006 10 months ago
@laschea006 Yes but (at least in Europe) it was depicted as an apple for centuries.
RonzyTinutza 9 months ago
@ittooklongtomakethis Nope exact opposite:
"Synopsis: The story follows an angel named Tira who's banished from heaven for rejecting her peers way of life. She ends up in purgatory and while she wanders the endless grey fields, heaven tempts her to join them once again. She destroys heaven within herself and falls back to the fields of grey. Now with Purgatory as her blank canvas, she creates her own heaven as she sees fit." (James Lee, deviantart)
Abent5866 4 months ago
@Abent5866 Okay, I think I'll stick to my opinion
ittooklongtomakethis 4 months ago
@Abent5866 even if it's right or wrong
ittooklongtomakethis 4 months ago
@ittooklongtomakethis "Synopsis: The story follows an angel named Tira who's banished from heaven for rejecting her peers way of life. She ends up in purgatory and while she wanders the endless grey fields, heaven tempts her to join them once again. She destroys heaven within herself and falls back to the fields of grey. Now with Purgatory as her blank canvas, she creates her own heaven as she sees fit." (James Lee, deviantart)
So this ending actually makes a lot more sense.
ShikogoFox 3 months ago
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ittooklongtomakethis 11 months ago
Why was the entire ending cut from the final draft?
RagnaroekChaos 11 months ago
good. now get to work on tarboy 2! lol no just kidding this is looking great. cant wait for full thing!
Falcor43 11 months ago
I'm not sure I understands it, but I like it.
The1truesushiboy 11 months ago
amazing..just amazing!
SuperNYYankees27 11 months ago
very original and very well done.
Solomon43822 11 months ago
Too awesome!!
xCrazyNina 11 months ago