it'd be sooo amazing to see you dressed up, maybe in a mask or makeup- interpreting to the words and music, with other cut scenes of course. easy with a vid cam. and windows movie maker. but other dan that- awesome!
yeah, the music was too loud. it would have been nice if it were just there as background, but it seemed as though it's trying to be one of the main focuses.
her tongue ring distracted me, too, but maybe that's 'cause i was staring at her mouth.
I thought the music was a bit loud... and maybe there was just a little bit too much 'tude... like, I felt that she didn't give the person watching a reason to like her.
Wow this was really good! I wish I could perform my poetry that well but when I try to I end up tripping over my words because of my stupid stage fright. But Nicholete was awesome I'd like to see more of her work
I don't about "porky". Thats a little mean lol. However, I do agree that she could definitely use ALOT of practice.......as well as a writing workshop or two.....
I agree with what jimmypop said about the music...it should either be turned way down volumewise, or just taken out. The poetry was amazing. I love the lines about the plastic pieces, the cutouts being the same, etc. Super creative. :-)
" try's to start slow clap" an doesnt care if any one els claps
BraceForSilence 8 months ago
Kind of bland,
there was little hook if any,
I'm sorry for the harsh critique but as a Slam poetry fanatic I lost interest quickly.
CzarThePlezer 1 year ago
it'd be sooo amazing to see you dressed up, maybe in a mask or makeup- interpreting to the words and music, with other cut scenes of course. easy with a vid cam. and windows movie maker. but other dan that- awesome!
slopPylessOns 1 year ago
Your delivery and body language is amazing which matches the words being said in this video thanks!
StephenWillemsPoetry 1 year ago
yeah, the music was too loud. it would have been nice if it were just there as background, but it seemed as though it's trying to be one of the main focuses.
her tongue ring distracted me, too, but maybe that's 'cause i was staring at her mouth.
i liked the piece. :]
pyrelic 2 years ago
Brilliant, but the music was more of a distraction than anything else.
komatoran 2 years ago
the music is utterly irritating.
owlsgohoot 3 years ago
I thought the music was a bit loud... and maybe there was just a little bit too much 'tude... like, I felt that she didn't give the person watching a reason to like her.
twil9ght 3 years ago
she is awesome :D
itsnourishment 3 years ago
Wow this was really good! I wish I could perform my poetry that well but when I try to I end up tripping over my words because of my stupid stage fright. But Nicholete was awesome I'd like to see more of her work
onx411 3 years ago
I'm hoping to gain some skill at slam poetry at some point. I really enjoyed this!
livingpassion 3 years ago
jimmypop73572 I agree with you too the music is too distracting.
M14CT 3 years ago
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p-p-p-p-p-porky p-p-p-p-pig needs some p-p-p-practice
AnonocosticZombie 4 years ago
I don't about "porky". Thats a little mean lol. However, I do agree that she could definitely use ALOT of practice.......as well as a writing workshop or two.....
Obscurus1 3 years ago
this is the third I've found by you on youtube, and all three were amazing... words crafted with excellence.
Does anyone know where I can find more by her?
chrisinajar 4 years ago
yea i will post them soon
sykesmarcus 4 years ago
A slam poem is not supposed to be put to music. It's about the words, and using sounds to set the mood is cheating. Sorry.
GBAGFACE 4 years ago 2
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fuck this!
Cheddar323 5 years ago
I agree with what jimmypop said about the music...it should either be turned way down volumewise, or just taken out. The poetry was amazing. I love the lines about the plastic pieces, the cutouts being the same, etc. Super creative. :-)
attackofthegeese 5 years ago
this would be way better without the music, it is destracting. other than that this is pretty amazing.
jimmypop73572 5 years ago